Body of a Horse, Heart of a Man
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "A Sacred Valley"A modern twist on Greek Mythology.
9 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is soooo good. I really enjoyed reading and have a feeling Diantha is going to learn so very much, as I will when I continue reading.
"Quite, and she also said you told your friend Cassie you didn't want to marry him. (friend,)
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This is soooo good. I really enjoyed reading and have a feeling Diantha is going to learn so very much, as I will when I continue reading.
"Quite, and she also said you told your friend Cassie you didn't want to marry him. (friend,)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Sally Law
This is a wonderful chapter and so romantic! A lot of mystery solved too and how they are fated to be with each other. In all relationships, things will need to be ironed out. Like the centaur thing and learning to speak horse. Fantastic addition to the book, my talented friend.
Sending you my best today as always, Rhonda dear, and Love & Blessings abundant.
Sal XOs
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This is a wonderful chapter and so romantic! A lot of mystery solved too and how they are fated to be with each other. In all relationships, things will need to be ironed out. Like the centaur thing and learning to speak horse. Fantastic addition to the book, my talented friend.
Sending you my best today as always, Rhonda dear, and Love & Blessings abundant.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Begin Again
What a wonderful place to "land" when your world is turned upside down, and what a nicer caretaker than Atrius. You've teased us with so many questions but made the reader not want to rush to get there. It's far more enjoyable to drift and learn as we go. Awesome, Rhonda. I loved it!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Note: "She coat was the color of nutmeg."
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What a wonderful place to "land" when your world is turned upside down, and what a nicer caretaker than Atrius. You've teased us with so many questions but made the reader not want to rush to get there. It's far more enjoyable to drift and learn as we go. Awesome, Rhonda. I loved it!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Note: "She coat was the color of nutmeg."
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully told, Rhonda! The section about White Lightning got me really quite emotional as we entered another realm of nature that always becomes so real in your story. Also I enjoyed the further fleshing out of Atrius' character, defining him as a very caring, sensitive and noble character (with impressively handsome looks too - the complete package:)). This chapter helps to explain the background (I'm still a bit worried about Cassie) but also maintain a sense of foreboding that Diantha isn't out of the woods yet (so to speak). Well done, Rhonda! All to play for! Take care Debbie xo
(Her) coat was the color of nutmeg
Who Wilson my fi(an)ce
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Beautifully told, Rhonda! The section about White Lightning got me really quite emotional as we entered another realm of nature that always becomes so real in your story. Also I enjoyed the further fleshing out of Atrius' character, defining him as a very caring, sensitive and noble character (with impressively handsome looks too - the complete package:)). This chapter helps to explain the background (I'm still a bit worried about Cassie) but also maintain a sense of foreboding that Diantha isn't out of the woods yet (so to speak). Well done, Rhonda! All to play for! Take care Debbie xo
(Her) coat was the color of nutmeg
Who Wilson my fi(an)ce
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was wonderful. I wonder if I could learn to talk horse? If you could send Atrius to me, perhaps... Hmm. This is going to be another wonderful story, Rhonda. I'm wondering if he will one day return to being a man. We'll see. Now, it seems that man was going to kill her, why couldn't her 'fiance' just not propose? You have me filling up with questions now, and I also don't want the answers until I get to the point you'll show us. Loving this, my friend. :) Sandra xxx One little nit below.
So, when will we being (be) going
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That was wonderful. I wonder if I could learn to talk horse? If you could send Atrius to me, perhaps... Hmm. This is going to be another wonderful story, Rhonda. I'm wondering if he will one day return to being a man. We'll see. Now, it seems that man was going to kill her, why couldn't her 'fiance' just not propose? You have me filling up with questions now, and I also don't want the answers until I get to the point you'll show us. Loving this, my friend. :) Sandra xxx One little nit below.
So, when will we being (be) going
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Kahlani
I'm loving A Sacred Valley. I understand your need to let the protagonist slowly grow into herself and I can't wait to watch this happen. I'm also very fond of Atrius! I think he is every woman's ideal man. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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I'm loving A Sacred Valley. I understand your need to let the protagonist slowly grow into herself and I can't wait to watch this happen. I'm also very fond of Atrius! I think he is every woman's ideal man. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from lancellot
This is very well written. It feels like a perfect female-oriented fantasy. You have solid tone, pacing and editing.
notes:
"She coat was the color of nutmeg."
-should this be-
"Her coat was the color of nutmeg."
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This is very well written. It feels like a perfect female-oriented fantasy. You have solid tone, pacing and editing.
notes:
"She coat was the color of nutmeg."
-should this be-
"Her coat was the color of nutmeg."
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Cassandra Vaillancourt
Hello. I loved your story. I'm just confused about the words Wilson my finance. Was that supposed to be fiance? That was the only thing that stood out the rest of the story was great!
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Hello. I loved your story. I'm just confused about the words Wilson my finance. Was that supposed to be fiance? That was the only thing that stood out the rest of the story was great!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Iza Deleanu
For once your images makes my heart sing so beautiful and colorful and the story is to die for. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
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For once your images makes my heart sing so beautiful and colorful and the story is to die for. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024