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The Death of Eve

alternate Eden ending

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao!

You now have two votes!

An out-of-the-box approach.

Love the analogy you made between the fall of Eva ( and Adamo) and the season Fall when trees and vegetation lose their leaves .

Leaves fall, decompose and decay just like Eva and Adam did after they ate from the Tree of knowledge.

They became mortal and eventually they died and their bodies decomposed.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I love the double meaning in this Autumnal poem as the elderly are often vulnerable at this time of year with wet leaves on the ground, I enjoyed this fine presentation, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

Comment from Julie Helms
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Ughh. I should have read through the entries before I posted mine. Here I thought I was being so clever and original. Great minds and all that!
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024