2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Katiemae1977
This is interesting for a haiku. I really like it. "A soul full of sunshine and a heart of gold" very nice.
Thoughouly enjoyed this one!
Luv&stuff
Katherine
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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This is interesting for a haiku. I really like it. "A soul full of sunshine and a heart of gold" very nice.
Thoughouly enjoyed this one!
Luv&stuff
Katherine
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Katherine
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Too me it says that her outward appearance reflects who she is on the inside. A beautiful and dear soul. Thank you for sharing your work with me, it was a pleasure ti read.
RJ
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Too me it says that her outward appearance reflects who she is on the inside. A beautiful and dear soul. Thank you for sharing your work with me, it was a pleasure ti read.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
A very beautiful Haiku and the golden colours of sunshine and gold are beautiful. Nice grouping of sunshine, shines, and shimmering. Very pleasing to read this one with the lovely image as well.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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A very beautiful Haiku and the golden colours of sunshine and gold are beautiful. Nice grouping of sunshine, shines, and shimmering. Very pleasing to read this one with the lovely image as well.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Wendy
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
It's really having the "heart of gold" that really makes someone's personality shimmer! Loved all your S and Sh alliteration in your poem and the shimmery picture!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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It's really having the "heart of gold" that really makes someone's personality shimmer! Loved all your S and Sh alliteration in your poem and the shimmery picture!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I am not beatiful but I'm kind.
❤️ Marival
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I'm sure you were quite the beauty in your youth! But now that we are older, it's our hearts that can show ageless beauty! 💖
Comment from shelley kaye
love the s and sh sounds - it flowed very smoothly
and the the heart of gold was a great end line!
nice written haiku with cool glowing imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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love the s and sh sounds - it flowed very smoothly
and the the heart of gold was a great end line!
nice written haiku with cool glowing imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ang Tang
Love this! I appreciate how there is no physical description, this could apply to any girl who radiates joy and light. I love how you styled it and the image selection as well. I'd love to read a longer version!!!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Love this! I appreciate how there is no physical description, this could apply to any girl who radiates joy and light. I love how you styled it and the image selection as well. I'd love to read a longer version!!!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, ang
I love haiku but I write longer poems and prose too.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Gypsy, the imagery in this poem kicks ass. I loved the picture you chose and the way you described her. Shimmering, which made think of something mystical, then the heart of gold which made me think of kindness. Maybe an angel. Gretchen
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Gypsy, the imagery in this poem kicks ass. I loved the picture you chose and the way you described her. Shimmering, which made think of something mystical, then the heart of gold which made me think of kindness. Maybe an angel. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gretchen
Gypsy hugs