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A parental concern

to support a teen~ with fireworks

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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What a joyful and poem! The imagery of "fireworks" and the expression of gratitude to Heaven is so nice to read. Your reflections on growing up and the relationship with your dad are so touching.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

Comment from Ang Tang
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I don't understand the poem. When you say to grow up with dance do you mean like dance class? And I have no idea what " O my fireworks did~ to thank you Heaven." means, at all... and same goes for "to hope with promise, a youthful delight means." Sorry

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
    this poem is understood by others
    and not to be taken with literalness~ without its charm..