A poetry battle
Come warble the struggle tune4 total reviews
Comment from Brandy N. Morrison
I really loved this poem! This poem has a strong hip-hop vibe, using rhythm and rhyme to address real issues like poverty, inequality, and street life. It feels raw and powerful, speaking to unity, resilience, and calling out injustice with a bold, unapologetic voice. The freestyle flow adds a sense of authenticity to its message.
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I really loved this poem! This poem has a strong hip-hop vibe, using rhythm and rhyme to address real issues like poverty, inequality, and street life. It feels raw and powerful, speaking to unity, resilience, and calling out injustice with a bold, unapologetic voice. The freestyle flow adds a sense of authenticity to its message.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
Comment from BermyBye50
astyanax,
Welcome to Fanstory. You skilled in crafting spoken word poetry is impressive. It is a form outside of my poetic wheelhouse.
This is an excellent well written spoken word poem by a talented poet.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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astyanax,
Welcome to Fanstory. You skilled in crafting spoken word poetry is impressive. It is a form outside of my poetic wheelhouse.
This is an excellent well written spoken word poem by a talented poet.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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thank you very much
Comment from Ang Tang
This poem hits hard with gritty, streetwise rhymes and unfiltered vibes. It's a freestyle anthem against oppression and inequality, exposing broken systems with raw energy. Real and unapologetic!
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This poem hits hard with gritty, streetwise rhymes and unfiltered vibes. It's a freestyle anthem against oppression and inequality, exposing broken systems with raw energy. Real and unapologetic!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a tuneful rap song to me and I enjoyed the walk through injustice and righting the wrongs in this battle of life here, a fun post, love Dolly x x x
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This sounds like a tuneful rap song to me and I enjoyed the walk through injustice and righting the wrongs in this battle of life here, a fun post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024