Fight With Daughter
Raising four daughters is a challenge, learning forever.6 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
The woman who was the Master Teacher when I was the student teacher put it this way, and all these years later, I have never forgotten it: It takes a lot more effort to raise a racehorse than it does a plow horse. But, in the end, when it's all done, it's a lot more satisfying. I hope this helps you today. xoxox
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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The woman who was the Master Teacher when I was the student teacher put it this way, and all these years later, I have never forgotten it: It takes a lot more effort to raise a racehorse than it does a plow horse. But, in the end, when it's all done, it's a lot more satisfying. I hope this helps you today. xoxox
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have two daughters and I adore them. Life is always a rollercoaster, but I feel as though they have turned out to be amazing people, I loved the ride through your words here, the ups and downs in life where we ride the storms and enjoy the picnics in the park in summer, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I have two daughters and I adore them. Life is always a rollercoaster, but I feel as though they have turned out to be amazing people, I loved the ride through your words here, the ups and downs in life where we ride the storms and enjoy the picnics in the park in summer, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Kahlani
I can feel your pain in this acrostic poem. Moms and dads all over the world experience it. It's a relatable topic, and hopefully, with time, things will get better. Well done and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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I can feel your pain in this acrostic poem. Moms and dads all over the world experience it. It's a relatable topic, and hopefully, with time, things will get better. Well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you . things change with the wind.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This poem really captures the intensity and raw emotion of conflict. The way you describe the whirlwind of emotions during an intense conversation is so powerful. That final reminder to "remember the love" is so perfect. Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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This poem really captures the intensity and raw emotion of conflict. The way you describe the whirlwind of emotions during an intense conversation is so powerful. That final reminder to "remember the love" is so perfect. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thank you, trying to remember the love, especially pre election.
Comment from talented150
That was a very wonderful Acrostic poem. Isn't it amazing what you can create when you have the beginning letter to work with. I can say I now like to write these Acrostic poems. Your is special, because what mother has not fought with their daughter, and it hurts. You sometimes do have to step back and remember to love them anyway. Be sure to write more of these poems.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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That was a very wonderful Acrostic poem. Isn't it amazing what you can create when you have the beginning letter to work with. I can say I now like to write these Acrostic poems. Your is special, because what mother has not fought with their daughter, and it hurts. You sometimes do have to step back and remember to love them anyway. Be sure to write more of these poems.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much. Wish it wasn't always so real.
Comment from lancellot
Yes, raising children, boys or girls has never been an easy job.
I recommend removing this additional title line that is inside your poem.
Fight with Daughter
It is not needed and throws off your acrostic.
Suggestion:
Intelligent, coming to terms
change to
Intelligence, coming to terms
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Yes, raising children, boys or girls has never been an easy job.
I recommend removing this additional title line that is inside your poem.
Fight with Daughter
It is not needed and throws off your acrostic.
Suggestion:
Intelligent, coming to terms
change to
Intelligence, coming to terms
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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thank you. useful tip. I appreciate it.