Thunder
The different sounds we hear in a storm.3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes an interesting Acrostic poem here reflecting upon the many and varied sounds to be heard when storms happen - Nature is certainly no shrinking violet and makes her presence felt.
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Yes an interesting Acrostic poem here reflecting upon the many and varied sounds to be heard when storms happen - Nature is certainly no shrinking violet and makes her presence felt.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
Comment from talented150
A masterpiece! I loved the way your poem flowed, each line into the next, and then you took great care to rhyme them and make it meaningful. Keep writing. I loved your poem.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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A masterpiece! I loved the way your poem flowed, each line into the next, and then you took great care to rhyme them and make it meaningful. Keep writing. I loved your poem.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful choice for the acrostic contest here as the word itself lends to common ground for reader and author... I would suggest, perhaps, the counting of syllables per line: your rhyme scheme is well-chosen, but the meter is not there to find a smooth read throughout. Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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A wonderful choice for the acrostic contest here as the word itself lends to common ground for reader and author... I would suggest, perhaps, the counting of syllables per line: your rhyme scheme is well-chosen, but the meter is not there to find a smooth read throughout. Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024