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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. A great message in only six words. Never stop at least trying to advance yourself and make yourself better inall the areas of your life. Don't settle.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the Six Word Poetry Contest. A great message in only six words. Never stop at least trying to advance yourself and make yourself better inall the areas of your life. Don't settle.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you Marilyn.
Comment from NanaGaye
Good straight forward advice in six simple words. You did a great job. Time for me to cook up a meal I'll take you're advice Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Good straight forward advice in six simple words. You did a great job. Time for me to cook up a meal I'll take you're advice Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Hello NanaGaye. Thank you so very much!
Comment from talented150
From six words, you make us all want to improve. That's powerful. I really liked your poem, and I so agree with it. We have to start somewhere, but we don't need to remain there. We constantly need to improve. Thanks for the motivation.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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From six words, you make us all want to improve. That's powerful. I really liked your poem, and I so agree with it. We have to start somewhere, but we don't need to remain there. We constantly need to improve. Thanks for the motivation.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much.
Comment from K.O. Wilson
Well said, and excellent use of contractions to stay within the naccary word count. Great picture also, the word choice is well though out this poem, thanks.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Well said, and excellent use of contractions to stay within the naccary word count. Great picture also, the word choice is well though out this poem, thanks.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from royowen
No, you're right, and if we are courageous or daring enough to make that particular Journey we may not like the journey, but gladdened by the kife's lesson that we've learned, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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No, you're right, and if we are courageous or daring enough to make that particular Journey we may not like the journey, but gladdened by the kife's lesson that we've learned, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you Roy.
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Well done