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The beach

an attractive wonder~ like Hawaii

2 total reviews 
Comment from Ang Tang
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This short verse captures nature's quiet strength and timeless willpower. The ocean's urge to stretch upon the shore and the mountains' steadfast rise evoke a powerful sense of peace and resilience. It's minimal yet beautifully profound.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

Comment from talented150
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I liked it. Your sentences set the scene for the beach and the mountains, and I could tell what that picture described looked. So good job of being concise.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024