Comment from
Ang Tang
This short verse captures nature's quiet strength and timeless willpower. The ocean's urge to stretch upon the shore and the mountains' steadfast rise evoke a powerful sense of peace and resilience. It's minimal yet beautifully profound.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
Comment from
talented150
I liked it. Your sentences set the scene for the beach and the mountains, and I could tell what that picture described looked. So good job of being concise.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024