Comment from
Cindy Decker 3
Eugene,
Your poem is very beautiful,
and the word count is perfect. You have my vote.
Good luck,
Best wishes, Eugene.
Good luck with all your writing.
Cindy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
Comment from
Julie Helms
This is an excellent, very appealing entry. I think all people can think back to their childhood and remember doing this. The concept is relayed completely in just a few words.
I don't recommend what you did for your subtitle. I think it steals the impact of your piece a little.
Thanks for sharing!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024