Morning
contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 5 votes.
I' m an early bird but even I once in a while don't want to jump out of bed at dawn.
Love the flow of your poem too.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 5 votes.
I' m an early bird but even I once in a while don't want to jump out of bed at dawn.
Love the flow of your poem too.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. (thanks for the vote too.)
Comment from HarryT
How does the subject know it is a nothing day when she is still in bed? May need a better search for an N word. Just my opinion. Overall a very cute effort at an acrostic using the word morning.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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How does the subject know it is a nothing day when she is still in bed? May need a better search for an N word. Just my opinion. Overall a very cute effort at an acrostic using the word morning.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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thank you for your thoughts on this.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This made me chuckle this afternoon. I think we've all been there, no is take! lol
In the fourth line, I think it should be 'to say' rather than 'too say'
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Hi there,
This made me chuckle this afternoon. I think we've all been there, no is take! lol
In the fourth line, I think it should be 'to say' rather than 'too say'
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you - I fixed my blunder and I appreciate your pointing it out.