Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Hey, congratulations, Shirley! Another winner! You're on fire! Love this. Your story is wonderful, full of black humour but not too much to scare a sensitive soul like me! And she was ok in the end and deserved her 'karma.' Absolutely fab pics. Are they AI generated? Anyway, well done! Debbie xx

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024

Hi Debbie. Thanks so much. Your comments always cheer me up!
As for the pics, yes I normally use copilot which is great fun. You can just order up the image you need xx

Comment from Kahlani

Excellent

What a delightful neighbor is our Miss Fairbanks! I enjoyed the dark humor and gore. I'm just glad to know that the puppy is okay. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024

Thank you :)

Comment from Craig Hickey

Good

An interesting read, that's for sure! The thing is I enjoyed it with all its twists and turns waiting for the ending... which is what I want the reader to experience. The way it flows with description to get you through that journey. Very inspired.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024

Thank you, Craig :)