2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Funeral Service".
9 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A splendid naani, Gypsy, with so much woven here that's not truly stated... well done!! ;) Thanx so much - as always - for sharing your pen with us! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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A splendid naani, Gypsy, with so much woven here that's not truly stated... well done!! ;) Thanx so much - as always - for sharing your pen with us! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Yvette
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A mother losing her daughter is tragic and goes against the natural order of life. This naani which is so beautifully presented contrasts the grief with the comfort and hope that religion can offer. And all expressed so succinctly. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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A mother losing her daughter is tragic and goes against the natural order of life. This naani which is so beautifully presented contrasts the grief with the comfort and hope that religion can offer. And all expressed so succinctly. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
It's a comforting thought to envision her daughter entering into heaven. It's still too difficult for any mother to have to bury her child and moms never recover from that.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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It's a comforting thought to envision her daughter entering into heaven. It's still too difficult for any mother to have to bury her child and moms never recover from that.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ Marival ❤️ 9
Comment from Wendy G
A fine poem,albeit a very sad one, with raw grief accompanying the mother's prayers. Beautifully presented with font colours reflecting the image. Lovely one.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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A fine poem,albeit a very sad one, with raw grief accompanying the mother's prayers. Beautifully presented with font colours reflecting the image. Lovely one.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very somber and sad poem you have penned using the Nani form. You used heartfelt words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very somber and sad poem you have penned using the Nani form. You used heartfelt words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from shelley kaye
aw so sad-- losing a child is the worst pain...
this was a great naani with good imagery
i like when she rises on angel wings...
nice one!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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aw so sad-- losing a child is the worst pain...
this was a great naani with good imagery
i like when she rises on angel wings...
nice one!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
This speaks of a strong belief in after death as seen also by many other cultures.
Your words are well presented and your picture compliments them very well. Thank for sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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This speaks of a strong belief in after death as seen also by many other cultures.
Your words are well presented and your picture compliments them very well. Thank for sharing
RJ
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from jessizero
I think this was a great Naani. Your poem was sad with a tinge of uplifting. I also liked your formatting and the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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I think this was a great Naani. Your poem was sad with a tinge of uplifting. I also liked your formatting and the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh my! This is a painful one, indeed, but you have presented it with your ever-perfect artistry and HEART and made it into a commodity of beauty. I can't imagine a more stark subject than the loss of one's child, but you have handled with panache and aplomb. xoxxo
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Oh my! This is a painful one, indeed, but you have presented it with your ever-perfect artistry and HEART and made it into a commodity of beauty. I can't imagine a more stark subject than the loss of one's child, but you have handled with panache and aplomb. xoxxo
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
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Always my pleasure. xoxox