Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Well, for sure I didn't see that coming! Nice twist, compelling set-up and excellent foundation for the final knock-out punch. Good luck in the FuriousFiction contest; I hope this story does you proud there!! xoxo

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024

Thank you, Rachelle, for reading this piece and for the very nice review. Unfortunately, it was for our own enjoyment, but that's not the purpose of writing.
I'm posting another to this month's prompt (#furiousfiction).
Many thanks,
Dick

reply by Rachelle Allen on 01-Nov-2024

Oh, gosh, Dick, I couldn't didn't disagree more! The only reason I write is for the joy it brings me. If others like it, too, well - BONUS!! But I am that selfish that I do it as a hobby that brings ME pleasure!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This was such a fun read! I love how the tension builds with the missing ring and the clever way it is resolved in the end. I thought this had the perfect blend of humor and suspense. I enjoyed every moment of it! Great job!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024

Thank you, Michael, for reading another story and for the very nice review. It's nice to see how a story hits a reader, and I appreciate having your input.
Best regards, again.
Dick