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Comment from karenina
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Thank God you came through Helene, regained power and can share this poem on what love is --

Beautifully presented, with your own photographs, and very much focused on:

"A spark enlightening
the dark in the heart
of another."

I can only imagine those in need after Helene reaching through these dark moments, days and weeks and experiencing the power of "Love thy neighbor!!

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    Recoveries, if at all, will take years. A three mile stretch of Interstate 40 was dumped into the river. Towns were flushed like t.p. after use.
    God looked after us when just 20 miles away ruined prevailed. Thanks for the review. Hope you are well.
reply by karenina on 09-Oct-2024
    Better than I deserve, as the saying goes. My brother-in-law, wife, and extended family live there...

    I'm so thankful both you and they are alive, uninjured. and beginning to find your new normal.

Comment from Douglas Goff
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Perfect font. Made it look like a love letter.


This stanza was inspired:
Love is devotion
set in motion.
A spark enlightening
the dark in the heart
of another.

I'm gonna have to say that this is a perfect entry for the contest. Well done!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
    Like James Bind with women? idk what I mean with that but I was watching From Russia with Love earlier and dang, he has good taste, as do you with this review. Thank you.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Tom,
It would probably behoove us to look within and do a spiritual self check to see how we're doing compared to the command to love one another. Loving someone is a sacrificial event, especially as we get older and more involved in our own lives. Thanks for sharing.
Have a blessed day.
Tom

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
    amen
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
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I can only congratulate you for the efforts you made to write such a thoughtful poem full of purpose and positive influence for the world, at a time when demonic forces are the most at work,
Well done,
Sarah

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
    Amen. Thanks for the thoughts.
Comment from Wendy G
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Well done Tom, I am pleased to see that the main point of love in your poem is that it is indeed "other-focussed", and not on what the individual can get out of it him- or her-self. And also that true love is often sacrificial. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
    I have responded to your comment previously it isn't here. It's been a problem lately. I see my comment to Roy O also failed, Thanks.
    Wish you were near to help with the recovery from Hurricane Helene. She was a beast.
Comment from Kahlani
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This is a truly inspiring and uplifting poem. It is a wonderful thought to be able to love someone more than you love yourself and to put their needs and care before your own.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you
    Wish I Could put it in use More than I do
    First time stopping by?
    Are you Hawaiia
Comment from jessizero
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I really admired the line "Love is devotion set in motion." You wrote a lovely piece on what love is. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    And thank you for visiting
    I am glad you enjoyed it
Comment from royowen
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I think scripture that men have seemingly been able to lay one's life for, but the difference being that Jesus laid His life down for His enemies, it's tough to lay down one's life for someone's enemy do you think? I've written poems about it, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Still the same
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
    I have responded to your comment three previous times but don't see it here. It's been a problem lately. I see my comment to Wendy also failed, Last try. Thanks.
Comment from Teri7
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Tom, This is a very nice and well written poem about what love is to you. You used great descriptive words and very lovely pictures. That is a very sweet one of you and your wife. A beautiful couple that knows what love is. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Commented earlier
    Yet it says nay
    Thank you
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed reading your poem. True love is surely all these things. It is not what we see on television or movies. You are right. It is unselfish. I like your collage. Great writing.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you