Love Bites
He's dangerously subtle2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a great tanka for the writing prompt. I think you got the syllable count right, and the subject was perfect. I liked the overall feel of this poem. It's romantic and creepy at once. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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This was a great tanka for the writing prompt. I think you got the syllable count right, and the subject was perfect. I liked the overall feel of this poem. It's romantic and creepy at once. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Jessi.
Comment from Kahlani
He surely does! This poem reminds me of vampire movies - which I love. Isn't it scary, though, to know the control they have over us, but still we submit?
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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He surely does! This poem reminds me of vampire movies - which I love. Isn't it scary, though, to know the control they have over us, but still we submit?
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Kahlani.