A Request from My Blood Center
A vampire tanka2 total reviews
Comment from Kahlani
Oh dear! Don't do it. I like the dark humor in your poem. 'Starve a vampire.' I don't think that's possible with Halloween around the corner. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Oh dear! Don't do it. I like the dark humor in your poem. 'Starve a vampire.' I don't think that's possible with Halloween around the corner. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Kahlani.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
YES! Let's all go donate to a local bloodbank and starve a vampire. Your syllable counts are all correct and you kept the poem criteria by using the word vampire. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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YES! Let's all go donate to a local bloodbank and starve a vampire. Your syllable counts are all correct and you kept the poem criteria by using the word vampire. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn.