confession
a evil confession5 total reviews
Comment from Todd Bourgeois
This is a very deep message. I love how you've repeated words to drive the message of them further and deeper. I love how each stanza introduces a new work to the fray bringing the whole piece to another level. Deep, powerful, relevant and provocative. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
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This is a very deep message. I love how you've repeated words to drive the message of them further and deeper. I love how each stanza introduces a new work to the fray bringing the whole piece to another level. Deep, powerful, relevant and provocative. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, What Do You See in the Dark? Do You See Fear or Comfort?, seems to track learning through the evil that was learned and the confession which follows.
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This poem, What Do You See in the Dark? Do You See Fear or Comfort?, seems to track learning through the evil that was learned and the confession which follows.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Kahlani
Hi godlucifer, I was initially a little bit confused when I started reading this poem but eventually I saw a rhythm and just went with the flow. An interesting read.
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Hi godlucifer, I was initially a little bit confused when I started reading this poem but eventually I saw a rhythm and just went with the flow. An interesting read.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
I think one thing that you and I have in common is real joy in manipulating words: Watching how they change meaning in different contexts, in different orders, next to different words.
The results are clearly intriguing. Thank you for sharing!
Julie
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I think one thing that you and I have in common is real joy in manipulating words: Watching how they change meaning in different contexts, in different orders, next to different words.
The results are clearly intriguing. Thank you for sharing!
Julie
Comment Written 14-Oct-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem feels almost like a mantra or chant. I love how it builds on itself. The way "signature" is used in the poem is interesting. You've crafted something that lingers in the mind! It makes you think. Well done!
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Your poem feels almost like a mantra or chant. I love how it builds on itself. The way "signature" is used in the poem is interesting. You've crafted something that lingers in the mind! It makes you think. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024