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Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very beautiful haiku for Patricia. I will be glad when she is back again too. You used very beautiful and heartfelt words with amazing imagery as always! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very beautiful haiku for Patricia. I will be glad when she is back again too. You used very beautiful and heartfelt words with amazing imagery as always! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem for Patricia with us. Yes, she loves her butterflies. I am praying for her healing along with many of us on FanStory. I know she feels it.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem for Patricia with us. Yes, she loves her butterflies. I am praying for her healing along with many of us on FanStory. I know she feels it.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Another wonderful offering for Patricia, here -- such an uplifting haiku, Gypsy, that I'm sure it will find a smile on its melody... Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Another wonderful offering for Patricia, here -- such an uplifting haiku, Gypsy, that I'm sure it will find a smile on its melody... Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Who has need for more words when you can say it so beautifully in only a few.
I love butterflies as they make me still feel a closeness with my mom. But these that you have here go so perfectly. I know all your info about and some of these talk about using less words is better. (Yes, I read all of the club info weekly) but I never saw it done before, as there were no more needed. That is why you are the haiku queen. So lovely! I truly enjoyed this. And I know Patricia will too.
Love, Debi
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Who has need for more words when you can say it so beautifully in only a few.
I love butterflies as they make me still feel a closeness with my mom. But these that you have here go so perfectly. I know all your info about and some of these talk about using less words is better. (Yes, I read all of the club info weekly) but I never saw it done before, as there were no more needed. That is why you are the haiku queen. So lovely! I truly enjoyed this. And I know Patricia will too.
Love, Debi
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debi 😊
May you have a wonderful weekend
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Thank you and the same to you. : )
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I gather from the posts for her book that Patricia is a lover of butterflies. She will, I'm sure, be delighted by this beautifully presented haiku. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I gather from the posts for her book that Patricia is a lover of butterflies. She will, I'm sure, be delighted by this beautifully presented haiku. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Patricia has problems reading so she listens to my poems. I'm not sure if someone reads them for her, or if she has a computer program. She is a very kind lady.
Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
totally cool post!!
a great haiku with deep feeling
and i love the last line!
nice imagery and smooth flow
and cool pics and colours, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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totally cool post!!
a great haiku with deep feeling
and i love the last line!
nice imagery and smooth flow
and cool pics and colours, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Such a lovely poem! Patricia's love of butterflies in her poems have spawned all kinds of butterfly poems flying back to her. Thanks for cheering up Patricia! She should be home by tomorrow.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Such a lovely poem! Patricia's love of butterflies in her poems have spawned all kinds of butterfly poems flying back to her. Thanks for cheering up Patricia! She should be home by tomorrow.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Oh, good news. I'm happy for her.
Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ Marival 😊
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, today is the day for Patricia's procedure, and I pray she will come through it with all the resolution and faith that God provides, beautifully written Gypsy, a very kind gesture indeed, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Oh yes, today is the day for Patricia's procedure, and I pray she will come through it with all the resolution and faith that God provides, beautifully written Gypsy, a very kind gesture indeed, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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You too