Comment from
Kahlani
This is a clever poem. It has rhythm and rhyme, and it flows smoothly. I like the dark humor; it adds a bit of fun. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
A fine vampire Tanka as another one bites the dust as the vampire population expands and another one succumbs to the bite of the living dead, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024