Comment from Sallyo

Good

Grand story... darkly funny and suspenseful. I found a few spelling errors, which are listed below.

of someones
of someone's

monstocity who's
monstrosity whose

ther in
there

possesion
possession

infedility
infidelity

Too da loo
Toodaloo!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

What a wildly imaginative and darkly piece! I love how you blend the grotesque with moments of genuine emotion! So terrific! Your tone is brilliant. There is a frantic yet oddly affectionate tone reading this. The mix of humor and horror kept me hooked.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024