Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku, Beautiful Morning, has the proper formatting and creates the scene of the glorious sun bursting up from behind the sleeping world and beginning a new day. Nice.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

thank you

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

What a serene and lovely haiku this is. And wow, did you ever find the PERFECT artwork to accentuate these beautifully chosen words. (Or did the picture come first, and then you wrote the haiku?) Either way, it makes for a perfect entry for the Haiku Poetry contest. I wish you much luck with it at the polls

You need a space on the last line, though, between your first and second words. xo

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

thank you

reply by Rachelle Allen on 20-Nov-2024

Sure

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a lovely haiku poem for the haiku contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day your presentation here is beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing with us. Patricia.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024

thank you