Comment from rspoet

Exceptional

Hello Pam,
A beautiful Sapphonic Triad and a wonderful poem for Patricia.
Perfect quote to inspire a poem and marvelous use of nature
to brighten anyone's day. Nice touch of rhyme and moving imagery.
Well done.
Best wishes to Patricia on a speedy recovery.
Robert

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024

Thank you for the exceptional rating and review, Robert. I appreciate your comments about the triad and poem, along with the quote and imagery. Patricia will appreciate your good wishes very much.

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hi Pam.
In my poetic world, I have always preferred subject over style. You have achieved both with this poem as your subtle, eloquent words express a beautiful message. Very nice.

Robert

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024

Thanks fore the review, Robert. I appreciate your comments about "subject over style," as well as the compliment of achieving that with this poem. It is one of my favorite forms. I am glad you liked the poem and the message.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 04-Oct-2024

You're welcome, Jan.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A beautiful Sapphonic Triad for one of nature's most graceful flyers.. well done and well-presented, my lady! Thanx for sharing that vision in conjunction with Mr. Frost! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review, Yvette. I appreciate your comments about the Triad and the butterflies. I am glad you liked the presentation and the nod to Robert Frost. He is my favorite poet.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A well crafted poem and I can tell you put in a lot of thought into this tribute to Patricia. I too enjoy Robert Frost and his poetry. I'm sure that Patricia will enjoy your work.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the poem and tribute to Patricia. I'm glad you like Robert Frost, too.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It is beautiful. I appreciate it so much. You can't even begin to imagine how these poems and writings for me. Have blessed my heart today. Have a good evening and a very good weekend. Patricia

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the poem, and I am glad the poems and writings being shared are meaningful to you. I hope your surgery goes well and you are back home soon. Take care and get well soon.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

A lovely and realistic poem of cheer for patricia and a thoughtful gesture to centre it on butterflies, which she does delight in. Beautiful image and very well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review, Wendy. I appreciate your comments about the poem and butterflies. I am glad you liked the image, too.

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Pam,
Excellent butterfly poem! I like that you use Robert Frost for inspiration!
Your last line is a nice summation of this beautiful poem and photo.
Best wishes, Pam,
Cindy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review, Cindy. I appreciate your comments about the poem and Robert Frost. I am glad you liked the last line, poem, and photo. Good wishes are returned to you.

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Beautiful words and a beautiful picture of a colorful butterfly should lift Patricia's spirit and bring feelings of calm and relaxation. The Robert Frost quote is perfect for someone that appreciates the beauty of butterflies. Thank you for sharing your thoughts for Patricia.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments about the words and picture. Thanks for sharing about lifting Patricia's spirit and "feelings of calm and relaxation." I am glad you liked the quote, too.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Love that quote from Robert Frost! And your poem expanded on it and showed us that those delicate petal-like wings actually do sing in their own way. Beautiful poem for our butterfly-loving poet, Patricia!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review, Helen. I appreciate your comments about the quote, as well as expanding on his theme, as well as the poem for our "butterfly-loving poet."

Comment from Val Crisson

Excellent

Love Frost, also, magical gift with words. This is such a lovely poem. I believe that butterflies and their metamorphsis are one of bases for lovely poetry. You last line was exquiste "delicate wings sing" Makes me wonder who Patrica is.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Thanks for the review, Val. I am glad you like Frost, too, as well as the poem. Butterflies are a good basis for poetry. I'm glad you liked the last line. Patricia is Pateclaw. She is in the hospital awaiting surgery.