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patcelaw

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Comment from Nicki.B
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This a beautiful poem written for Patricia, im sure she is going to love it, what a selection of lovely poems and notes and prayers which will help her along her healing journey. Well done
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2024
    Thank you, NIcki, for the great review. I hope the book encourages Patricia. Thanks so much for stopping by with a review. Blessings. Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
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I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem about Patricia. If all goes as she expected, she should be able to return home today. She loves butterflies and you chose a picture of a beautiful one to accompany your poletry.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the great review of my poem for Patricia. She said her surgery was postponed one more day. I hope she's able to be home soon. Thanks for stopping by. Blessings. Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
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I've read so many lovely poems for Patricia and I am really hoping and praying that she is on the mend soon. This is a really well written piece and I can certainly feel the love everyone has for Patricia.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you for the great review of my poem for Patricia. I'm glad you are also praying for her recovery. Hopefully she will be home soon. Blessings. Carol
Comment from DonandVicki
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A very touching poetic tribute to a friend. Yes we need to give all glory to God. Nicely crafted poem. An I am sure that your friend will enjoy it. I pray every morning for those that are suffering.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much for the great review of my poem for Patricia. I'm glad you are praying each day, and I hope she'll be home soon. Blessings. Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Thank you for adding to my book for Patricia. She wrote before she went under.She had already walked a mile. She says she should go home tomorrow, with a temporary pacemaker while she recovers. She is a ball of fire. Karen

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Karen, for the great review of my poem for Patricia. Walking on the day of surgery is really commitment! Blessings. Carol
Comment from Dawn Munro
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I must admit, I didn't know
Pat was in hospital, although
in fairness, I was there as well -
but now I'm sure it's hard to tell...

I must write something for her too -- thanks for the heads up!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the great review. Patricia had one heart stent put in. She is scheduled for the second stent, I think today. I hope you're feeling better and recovering well. Blessings. Carol
reply by Dawn Munro on 05-Oct-2024
    Yes, I'm aware -- I get her postings on FB. Thank you. She's actually had the second stent now -- says she's due to be released tomorrow. :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Lovely image and presentation, Carol.
-You wrote a very good poem for Patricia.
-She will appreciate it very much.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-A very good opening verse about
how she loves butterflies
and trying "new poem styles."
-A very good closing verse that
offers a sense of comfort as
we offer our words to help her through this.
-I'm sure she is appreciating them.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Pam, for the great review. I appreciate your details, and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Have a blessed weekend. Carol
reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Oct-2024
    You are very welcome, Carol, and I did enjoy your poem. You have a good weekend, too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine poem for Patricia as she undergoes surgery and your uplifting poem will lift her spirits as she loves butterflies, I enjoyed your fine words Carol, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thanks, Dolly, for the nice review of my poem. I do hope Patricia likes it, especially the butterfly. Thanks for stopping by with a review. Blessings. Carol
Comment from patcelaw
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Thank you so much Carol for a very pretty poem that you have written for me and I appreciate it very much. I am doing quite well. My surgery has been rescheduled for tomorrow because of an overload of patients here in Phoenix area, but I am not a critical patient so I can be set aside for a while. I thank you so much for thinking about me and I thank you for your prayers. God bless you and may you have a wonderful day. Patricia.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Hi, Patricia. I'm glad you are doing well and were able to read my poem today. I've been praying for you. I hope the extra day of rest helps you recover well before the second surgery. Blessings. Carol
Comment from Sugarray77
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Carol, you have written an excellent verse that incorporates good rhyme choices and the lovely iambic meter. I so enjoyed reading it and wish you all the best. Fondly,

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much for the great review of my poem for Patricia. She said her second surgery has been pushed off one more day, so I hope the extra rest helps her recover well. Thanks for your kind words. Blessings on your weekend. Carol