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Comment from Teri7
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Nicki, I wish I had six stars to give you for this very lovely and well written poem for Patricia. I just know she will start to feel better reading words like these. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much Teri for your kind words and the lovely sentiment on the stars, most important thing is that Patricia will find some comfort and joy in reading all the gorgeous poems and notes and prayers written for her!
    Best Wishes
    Nicki x
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much Teri for your kind words and the lovely sentiment on the stars, most important thing is that Patricia will find some comfort and joy in reading all the gorgeous poems and notes and prayers written for her!
    Best Wishes
    Nicki x
reply by Teri7 on 05-Oct-2024
    😊💕❤️
Comment from LJbutterfly
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The beautiful well chosen words of your poem are calming and reassuring. I'm sure they will bring joy as Patricia views the colorful garden you've provided, and relaxes in the healing moments of flowers and blue skies. Thank you for sharing with us also.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    I really hope so bless her! Thanks so much for your kind words and lovely review
    Best Wishes
    Nicki
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Your picture is so beautiful, simply gorgeous. I do not recall seeing you before. You have written an amazing piece of poetry for Pat. I am sorry I have no sixes left. Pat has many many friends here, and I have met a few new ones. Thanks for adding to the book. Karen :-)

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Ah thanks so much Karen, that's no problem at all! I don't know Pat too much at all to be honest, I'm pretty new here. Funny I haven't seen you either! Marylin kindly sent me on the right direction to add to the book. You are so good to set this up for Pat, id imagine shes going to love, Ireally hope her recovery goes really well, it's such a thoughtful community here on FS.
    Best Wishes
    Nicki x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You painted an ambient scene with your colourful words here Nicki and this poem is a joy to read.

Suggestion for this line:
(Glow with many colours, pretty wings (with) such pizzazz)

Love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much Dolly, I was a little stuck with that I changed it around completely you're so right it just didn't sit right. Thanks for your kind guidance
    Best Wishes
    Nicki
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much Dolly, I was a little stuck with that I changed it around completely you're so right it just didn't sit right. Thanks for your kind guidance
    Best Wishes
    Nicki
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really enjoyed your poem. Especially with the butterflies and birds bringing the garden to life! I love your word choices. Especially the idea of breathing in "God's therapy" - perfect! Very creative and so enjoyable to read!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    I'm really glad your liked it Micheal it is a peaceful scene. Thanks for your kind review!
    Best Wishes
    Nicki
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    I'm really glad your liked it Micheal it is a peaceful scene. Thanks for your kind review!
    Best Wishes
    Nicki
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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You've created a beautiful and very evocative post here for dear Patricia. I like the way you've flooded the senses with colours, scents, birdsong and beauty. Well done, Nicki! Debbie x

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thanks Deb, I'm glad you enjoyed. Hopefully Patricia will too. The lovely Marylin sent me a message to let me know the types of things she like to prompt, so that was a great help xx
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thanks Deb, I'm glad you enjoyed. Hopefully Patricia will too. The lovely Marylin sent me a message to let me know the types of things she like to prompt, so that was a great help xx
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Nicki, This is perfect for Patricia!! I love the poem with the mention of butterflies and birds and the beautiful picture of a flower garden. she will adore this! Great job!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    Ah hopefully now. Any little thing to brighten her up would be amazing the poor thing. Thanks Marylin x
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    Ah hopefully now. Any little thing to brighten her up would be amazing the poor thing. Thanks Marylin x