When Poets Fade
a Nonet15 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Oh my goodness!
What a beautifully-crafted nonet that speaks volumes and resonates deeply with me.
Yes, there is sadness in your words, but there is also hope for in your nonet you prove that your "once-filled mind" is actually not still at all!
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Oh my goodness!
What a beautifully-crafted nonet that speaks volumes and resonates deeply with me.
Yes, there is sadness in your words, but there is also hope for in your nonet you prove that your "once-filled mind" is actually not still at all!
Thank you for sharing!
fondly,
diane
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Diane, for all those kudos. Indeed, I still find the words at times. Rod
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Oh wow! Did I identify with this as I sat down today to write a poem. They used to flow so easily, but as you say, "My mind . . . is very still." This is outstanding poetry- so you still have it.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Oh wow! Did I identify with this as I sat down today to write a poem. They used to flow so easily, but as you say, "My mind . . . is very still." This is outstanding poetry- so you still have it.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Verna, you have made my week with your accolades about my Nonet. I am pleased you can relate to the Speaker. Rod
Comment from Begin Again
Are the words of writing fading or because we are aging words in general are slipping away, only to have a memory or a thought jolt us occasionally (like the waves against the rocks)? Very well written and much to think about.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Are the words of writing fading or because we are aging words in general are slipping away, only to have a memory or a thought jolt us occasionally (like the waves against the rocks)? Very well written and much to think about.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
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Hi, Carol. Many thanks for your kind praise of my Nonet. Yes, you are right. Often it is a memory that helps this poet bounce back. Rod
Comment from Nicki.B
They can fade I'd imagine but will always bounce back!
An excellent poem, Lord knows we aren't ready to fade just yet!
Well done and lovely nonet
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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They can fade I'd imagine but will always bounce back!
An excellent poem, Lord knows we aren't ready to fade just yet!
Well done and lovely nonet
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Hi, Nicki. Many thanks for your kind praise of my Nonet. Bouncing back takes me longer these days. Rod
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You're welcome Rod! Not to worry important thing is you do!
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent nonet Rod, speaking of times when those words we grasp hold of, may stay for a short while, but vanish like the setting sun, a great entry in this nonet contest, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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This is an excellent nonet Rod, speaking of times when those words we grasp hold of, may stay for a short while, but vanish like the setting sun, a great entry in this nonet contest, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Hi, Roy. So pleased you enjoyed my Nonet. Many thanks for your high praise. Rod
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Most welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Rod.
-You wrote a very good nonet with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and good comparisons.
-The first three lines make a strong opening.
-You reflect on those days when words came so easily,
"splashing across the page."
-Two very good comparisons in the poem with
words like waves and your mind like the sea.
-A very good contrast with the opening and closing thoughts.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
-Also, congratulations on your win in the cinquain contest.
Very well deserved and thanks for entering.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Rod.
-You wrote a very good nonet with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and good comparisons.
-The first three lines make a strong opening.
-You reflect on those days when words came so easily,
"splashing across the page."
-Two very good comparisons in the poem with
words like waves and your mind like the sea.
-A very good contrast with the opening and closing thoughts.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
-Also, congratulations on your win in the cinquain contest.
Very well deserved and thanks for entering.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Pam, I truly appreciate your comprehensive review of my Nonet. Thank you very much. Rod
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You are very welcome, Rod. You know what it's like being an English teacher, even retired, we still have a way with words!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed this poem. Sometimes late at night I think of these good words for poems. Then other times nothing comes. I can relate. Your picture is a good choice for the poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed this poem. Sometimes late at night I think of these good words for poems. Then other times nothing comes. I can relate. Your picture is a good choice for the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Hi, Brenda. I am delighted you enjoyed my Nonet. I am also glad you can relate. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from jake cosmos aller
this nonet reminds me of a true story. When my sister died at age 45 of a very rare disease - only five cases in the US that year, where she suddenly had her throat paralyzed and was breathing through a tube, my two siblings and I attended her impromptu funeral which featured scattering her ashes into the wind over the Pacific ocean. as we tossed her ashes a huge wave came up and took her ashes from us and I felt her soul being liberated somehow. that image remained with me need to work it into a poem or story some day. she died in 2007.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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this nonet reminds me of a true story. When my sister died at age 45 of a very rare disease - only five cases in the US that year, where she suddenly had her throat paralyzed and was breathing through a tube, my two siblings and I attended her impromptu funeral which featured scattering her ashes into the wind over the Pacific ocean. as we tossed her ashes a huge wave came up and took her ashes from us and I felt her soul being liberated somehow. that image remained with me need to work it into a poem or story some day. she died in 2007.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Jake, for sharing your story and my poem. I hope you are able soon to translate that experience into a poem. Rod
Comment from Katiemae1977
Love this nonet very much mystery poet. It's hard enough to get one to flow smoothly but you have achieved that. Your words fit the poem perfectly without sounding forced.
Best wishes in the contest.
Luv&stuff
Katherine
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Love this nonet very much mystery poet. It's hard enough to get one to flow smoothly but you have achieved that. Your words fit the poem perfectly without sounding forced.
Best wishes in the contest.
Luv&stuff
Katherine
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Katharine, I am thrilled you like my poem so much and I appreciate that six-star bonus. Rod
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
There are many strong contenders in this nonet contest.
Love the comparison you made between poetry and the sea
The opening analogy is beautiful , very poetic and describes brilliantly what poetry is.
Love even the second analogy .
A powerful entry a delight to read.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Ciao!
There are many strong contenders in this nonet contest.
Love the comparison you made between poetry and the sea
The opening analogy is beautiful , very poetic and describes brilliantly what poetry is.
Love even the second analogy .
A powerful entry a delight to read.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, tempeste, for your kind praise. I am delighted you love the analogies.