Reviews from

For Patricia

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Patricia"
patcelaw

11 total reviews 
Comment from LJbutterfly
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is an inspiring, poetic prayer for Patricia. Your sincere and calming words should bring her peace and joy as she recovers. Thank you for sharing your uplifting words with us.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you, LJbutterfly. I love that we are a family in FS and cherish every moment.
    God bless,
    Steve
Comment from Ric Myworld
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Taking time out to wish others well is possibly the best medicine of all, for the patient, and even more so for the sender. That a few short words can make a difference means the world. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Ric. I agree. we need to support and lift our family and friends.
    God bless,
    Steve
Comment from Jacob1395
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I really hope Patricia's surgery goes well, and that she'll soon be on the road to recovery. I can feel there is a lot of love for her on FanStory, and I will definitely be keeping her in my thoughts today.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Jacob. Patricia can feel everyone's love and prayers.
    God bless,
    Steve
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a wonderful poem for Patricia in her hour of need and I enjoyed your kind words of support here for her. A fine poem for her treasured book Steve, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Dolly. I hope many others add chapters as well.
    God bless,
    Steve
Comment from GWHARGIS
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This was very nice. Your offering of well wishes was beautiful. It sounds like she's in very good and gifted hands with her surgeon. Great poem. Gretchen

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Gretchen. I love that there are so many others sending her prayers.
    God bless,
    Steve
Comment from royowen
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a lovely get well wish and prayer and poem for Patricia Steve, she will find this as an incredible gift and encouragement for her soul, she will be truly blessed by the sacrifice you have made for her, bless you my friend, Roy

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Roy. I hope everyone adds to her book. This is a wonderful idea.
    God bless,
    Steve
reply by royowen on 03-Oct-2024
    Yes it is Steve
Comment from lyenochka
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thank you for writing this lovely poem for our Patricia! I am glad that she knows how much she's loved and that we're all praying for her. I read her recent update and will add my chapter.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Lyenochka. She will love to hear from you and all who added chapters.
    God bless,
    Steve
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Good job, Steve. I don't know Patricia well. She reviews my poems kindly. I will pray as well. I hope she recovers soon.


Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wouds inflicted by reason" -- Novali

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Gypsy. Same here, my friend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem/prayer for Patricia with us. I enjoyed reading and I know Patricia will be blessed by it. I'm sure she feels God's healing arm around her.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted



Awakened by a lovely sound
in recovery, you look around

You wonder what it is you hear
finding yourself without fear

On the left side of the sheet
You can feel your heart's fresh beat
Looking toward our lord above
Thanking him for all his love

A tear rolls softly from your eyes
You pray for those who lost their lives

You'll tell the story of one strong soul
Who cured your world and made you whole

What do you think? Karen









This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    I love it! Thank you.
    I went and edited it. You Rock!
    God bless,
    Steve
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 02-Oct-2024
    You wrote very well.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    Thank you