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patcelaw

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A faithful and honest poem as we remember our youth with fondness Jim and I enjoyed your gentle delivery here, a magical poem for us to enjoy, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

Comment from Ric Myworld
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I'm sure all the kind and poetic words will go a long way toward helping Patricia work her way through this trying time. Someone said she was able to walk about a half a mile today. So, hopefully, that proof the prayers are working.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this healing prayer for Patricia with us. I know she feels all the prayers her FanStory family has lifted up for her. We'll continue praying.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

Comment from Esther Brown
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Jim I am curious. This says it is a part of a multiauthor book? Where does it start? Is it poetry or prose? I keep stumbling around this site finding things and missing things I want to read of yours. You are a blessing to me. Esther

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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Thank you, Jim for a very lovely poem Oh my God,you have written for my book? I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I especially appreciate the way. Good wishes in this poem for me. God bless you so much. Patricia.


 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Thank you for this work. I appreciate the effort. I am sure she will too. Other people say they wrote but I am not seeing them.
This is very confusing, Karen

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Jim. This is a very nice piece about the passing of time and the relationships among us. The last paragraph is a beautiful summary as you call upon our position in Christ.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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This is a lovely post that you've made for Patricia's book and I know it will boost her spirits and give her comfort. Thanks for sharing and have a happy day.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024