For Patricia
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Marilyn,
I'm sure that Patricia will appreciate this fine poem gal. I don't usually do poems, but I did send her a note and have received an answer back. Hopefully she'll get the surgery she needs an will be back to normal again soon. Thanks for your caring heart.
Blessings,
Tom
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Hello Marilyn,
I'm sure that Patricia will appreciate this fine poem gal. I don't usually do poems, but I did send her a note and have received an answer back. Hopefully she'll get the surgery she needs an will be back to normal again soon. Thanks for your caring heart.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
Comment from Amelie Johns
This is a beautiful acrostic poem dedicated to a wonderful lady. I don't know Patricia but I can tell from this poem how kind and amazing she is. I hope she gets well soon. What a meaningful gift is a book of poems.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful acrostic poem dedicated to a wonderful lady. I don't know Patricia but I can tell from this poem how kind and amazing she is. I hope she gets well soon. What a meaningful gift is a book of poems.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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thank you. Yes, it is a great gift and i'm so happy to see so many contributors.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Isn't it wonderful how someone who truly trusts in God's word and spends her time trusting in faith and witnessing to those around them can touch all the hearts of those who read them. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Isn't it wonderful how someone who truly trusts in God's word and spends her time trusting in faith and witnessing to those around them can touch all the hearts of those who read them. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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thanks for reading
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful Acrostic poem for Patricia letting her know how much she means to you and her FanStory family. I hope your sincere and heartwarming words lifts her spirit as she recovers. My prayers are with her.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful Acrostic poem for Patricia letting her know how much she means to you and her FanStory family. I hope your sincere and heartwarming words lifts her spirit as she recovers. My prayers are with her.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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thank you so much. You should add something yourself. We are hoping to fill the book up. A poem or just some special words for her and maybe a lovely picture of butterflies, birds or flowers.
Comment from patcelaw
Thank you so very much Marilyn for a very nice poem that you have written for me and I appreciate it so very much. I can't tell you how many of the people on fan storyhave blessed me over the years that I've been here. I wish fan storyyou the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very good week. Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much Marilyn for a very nice poem that you have written for me and I appreciate it so very much. I can't tell you how many of the people on fan storyhave blessed me over the years that I've been here. I wish fan storyyou the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a very good week. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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My pleasure, Patricia. Everyone is praying for you and will be glad when you're back home safe and sound.
Comment from Neonewman
This is an outstanding acrostic for Patricia. Thank you for sharing your talent with her and all of your fans. I know she will cherish all these fine works FS family has delivered.
God bless,'
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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This is an outstanding acrostic for Patricia. Thank you for sharing your talent with her and all of your fans. I know she will cherish all these fine works FS family has delivered.
God bless,'
Steve
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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thanks, Steve. I know we are all happy to add something for her.
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My pleasure.
Comment from jmdg1954
A fantastic acrostic poem titled, Patricia for a wonderful FanStorian member. Your choice of words are warm and comforting to read and will be for Patricia as she recovers.
Great addition to her book.
John
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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A fantastic acrostic poem titled, Patricia for a wonderful FanStorian member. Your choice of words are warm and comforting to read and will be for Patricia as she recovers.
Great addition to her book.
John
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thank you john for the kind review and the unexpected 6 stars. How nice! You should add something of your own to her book. She would appreciate it, I'm sure. Give her one of your amazing recipes!
Comment from jim vecchio
No jokes here. That was a touching and sensitive post for our fellow FS writer. And, as a birdbrain, or lover of birds, I enjoyed that illustration. Thanks for using your talent to magnify the talent of Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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No jokes here. That was a touching and sensitive post for our fellow FS writer. And, as a birdbrain, or lover of birds, I enjoyed that illustration. Thanks for using your talent to magnify the talent of Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Jim
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Thanks for that post.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A wonderful image skilfully complemented with your acrostic message to Patricia which I'm sure she'll appreciate. I'm not now sure sure if she's in hospital or out but send her my love and very best. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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A wonderful image skilfully complemented with your acrostic message to Patricia which I'm sure she'll appreciate. I'm not now sure sure if she's in hospital or out but send her my love and very best. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thanks you, Debbie
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh, Marilyn, this is absolutely lovely. This is in my opinion an absolute 10 star post. You did a wonderful job on your acrostic. It used to be that I was the only one who did the long rhyming metered acrostics and now it has caught on. But look at you doing not only rhymed but metered so beautifully. You did a wonderful job and I know Patricia will be so happy about this one!!
Patricia, you know how much I love you and I'm praying for you with an actual prayer cloth. Take care of yourself and get lots of rest.
Love to you both! Debi
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Oh, Marilyn, this is absolutely lovely. This is in my opinion an absolute 10 star post. You did a wonderful job on your acrostic. It used to be that I was the only one who did the long rhyming metered acrostics and now it has caught on. But look at you doing not only rhymed but metered so beautifully. You did a wonderful job and I know Patricia will be so happy about this one!!
Patricia, you know how much I love you and I'm praying for you with an actual prayer cloth. Take care of yourself and get lots of rest.
Love to you both! Debi
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Debi. That means a lot. I was happy to do it for her.