Anguish
Senryu3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao,
In such a scenario, humans would finally put their differences aside and united we would fight the robots.
At least we would not be killing each other anymore like now.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
Ciao,
In such a scenario, humans would finally put their differences aside and united we would fight the robots.
At least we would not be killing each other anymore like now.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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yes- interesting -thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from artisart4u
It depends upon what they are deprogrammed for and when the event will occur. I hope that they have some that will shoot the ones that attack, down.
Your picture is nice and you have the right amount of syllables and meaning for your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
It depends upon what they are deprogrammed for and when the event will occur. I hope that they have some that will shoot the ones that attack, down.
Your picture is nice and you have the right amount of syllables and meaning for your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Interesting review zanya
Comment from Claire Tennant
This poem is cleverly done; its message makes the reader think. I loved the use of the word dystopian and the simplicity of the message. I wish you well in this entry. It certainly matches the requirement of Senryu
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
This poem is cleverly done; its message makes the reader think. I loved the use of the word dystopian and the simplicity of the message. I wish you well in this entry. It certainly matches the requirement of Senryu
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
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Great review zanya
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You're welcome