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Senryu

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao,

In such a scenario, humans would finally put their differences aside and united we would fight the robots.

At least we would not be killing each other anymore like now.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    yes- interesting -thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from artisart4u
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It depends upon what they are deprogrammed for and when the event will occur. I hope that they have some that will shoot the ones that attack, down.
Your picture is nice and you have the right amount of syllables and meaning for your poem.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    Interesting review zanya
Comment from Claire Tennant
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This poem is cleverly done; its message makes the reader think. I loved the use of the word dystopian and the simplicity of the message. I wish you well in this entry. It certainly matches the requirement of Senryu

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2024
    Great review zanya
reply by Claire Tennant on 09-Oct-2024
    You're welcome