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Comment from Bill Schott
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This limerick suite, Pat with Butterfly, has the proper formatting and sends out a positive vibe that will be received with the same sweet emotions with which it was created. Nice.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    She loves butterflies, I sent her a bunch to download instead of flowers. She appreciates her friends showing their concern. If I go in for an overhaul on my back, I expect jokes and stories! :-) Karen
Comment from Kahlani
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Another good friend of Patricia's. I've yet to meet her, but I look forward to doing so and reading some of her work. She's lucky to have a friend like you, Karen.

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 Comment Written 04-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    I like your icon. My icon show my muse. Isn't she a hoot?
    Pass the word along. She is getting the second stint today, and also a temporary pacemaker while she recovers. So it will take a bit longer than last time. She walked two miles yesterday total. She was so pleased. No shortness of breath, no dizzyness. She plans to go home tomorrow. THanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Ric Myworld
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It's always nice when kind hearts take time out to wish those going through a hard times well. I hope that Patricia gets well soon. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    She had surgery yesterday and told me she walked half a mile. No more heparin. Yea. I do wish your muse would come knocking at your door. Here's another opener. Josh Bannister was stuck in this hell hole for a couple of days until his car was fixed and his insurance check cleared. Minneola, Texas is not the hot spot he had been aiming for, when that two ton truck aimed at his car. This place made a hell of a burger though. He'll manage for a couple of days.
    Then, the door opened and all the air was sucked out of the room. Ida Lea Summers entered the bar. :-)
reply by Ric Myworld on 02-Oct-2024
    You don't need me writing. Just take that fantastic start to a story and run with it. I can't wait to read it all. :-)
Comment from Begin Again
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I wish the best of the best for Patricia as well.... I simply love all her poems but especially the ones about butterflies. This was so kind of you, Karen. I know she will love it.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    You are welcome. I hope people can add easily now. Karen
Comment from gansach
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What a lovely message and poem for Patricia. It will make her very happy. She is such a sweetheart and writes such uplifting poems that brighten the day. I always watch for them. And she's such a wonderful reviewer, too. Praying all goes well for her. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the read. Please drop her a note for the book. She has a lot of people on here that say she is their friend. where are they? She has two chapters both by me. If none come tomorrow I will write another one. She deserves better than that don't you think? Karen
reply by gansach on 02-Oct-2024
    I'm working on mine. Will post tomorrow. Thanks for doing this!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    She just told me everything went fine, and they will be doing #2 thursday. No more heparin! Yea! Karen
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Okay, I love this because many caregivers are often overlooked. They really are unsung heroes doing things most of us would not.

Good job, Karen, Coming form a family of many caregivers, I had to six star this.
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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    Okay thank you, Now write her a note for the book. So far there is me and me. She is supposed to have a lot of friends on here. Thanks for the six. Karen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Another sweet and thoughtful post for Patricia, this time in verse form which I'm sure she'll appreciate. Karen, I'm not sure if you should change your heading to read poetry? Thanks for sharing. Debbie

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    There is writing and poetry. There ought to be more types.
    Thanks for the read. Please drop her a note for the book. She has a lot of people on here that say she is their friend. where are they? She has two chapters both by me. If none come tomorrow I will write another one. She deserves better than that don't you think? Karen
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes, she's waiting for an op on her heart, but she has many prayer requests going up in the heavenlies for this precious lady who is much loved, this is beautifully written my friend Karen, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    Than kks for the read. Please drop her a note for the book. She has a lot of people on here that say she is their friend. where are they? She has two chapters both by me. If none come tomorrow I will write another one. She deserves better than that don't you think? Karen
reply by royowen on 02-Oct-2024
    No pressure
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    I just got her update. They are doing the second part thursday. She is fine. And said she could feel our love. Good folks doing good things works:-)
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was a very nice poem you've written for Patricia. She does love butterflies. Her work is always positive and uplifting. Kudos to you for lifting her spirits by dedicating these poems to her. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the read. Please drop her a note for the book. She has a lot of people on here that say she is their friend. where are they? She has two chapters both by me. If none come tomorrow I will write another one. She deserves better than that don't you think? Karen
Comment from jim vecchio
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Thank you for devoting this space to our wonderful friend. Please, as I just wrote, send me a message about how this lowly ignorant one might add to the book.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    pull up one of my messeages to pat. Scroll down to the review box. Right above it you will see MULTIBOOK tehn you will see little buttons. One says "add chapter" click the button and it takes you to a form very similiar to the forn you fill out for a regular posting. Thank you dear friend.
reply by jim vecchio on 02-Oct-2024
    I entered one today. Hope it worked.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
    It did thank you.