Captivated
A cadence poem for the pen to paper club12 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is a nice cadence poem. When water stops flowing because of falling temperatures it seem to make amazing art in ice. This does look like a bridal veil.
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This is a nice cadence poem. When water stops flowing because of falling temperatures it seem to make amazing art in ice. This does look like a bridal veil.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
I like this one a lot, June. Your version of the cadence poetic form is nicely done. I thought your use of winter freezing the cascade was very appropriate to the sixth line. Great job.
Melissa
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I like this one a lot, June. Your version of the cadence poetic form is nicely done. I thought your use of winter freezing the cascade was very appropriate to the sixth line. Great job.
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This cadence poem, Captivated, has the proper formatting and likens the frozen falling water to the stopped memory of a perfect moment when two become one.
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This cadence poem, Captivated, has the proper formatting and likens the frozen falling water to the stopped memory of a perfect moment when two become one.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Very cool poem! We even have a waterfall out this way called the Bridal Veil. I can imagine it freezing over just like that. I liked the wedding allusion with the bridal veil and "Winter's kiss captivates Autumn."
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Very cool poem! We even have a waterfall out this way called the Bridal Veil. I can imagine it freezing over just like that. I liked the wedding allusion with the bridal veil and "Winter's kiss captivates Autumn."
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
Comment from Aussie
Wow! June, this is the best poem I have read today and the photo says it all. Thundering waterfall stopped in its tracks by winter ice. Well done! K xx
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Wow! June, this is the best poem I have read today and the photo says it all. Thundering waterfall stopped in its tracks by winter ice. Well done! K xx
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great photo June of this - frosty bridal veil- of water frozen by the winter chill. A lovely and descriptive Cadence poem and that final line is a beauty. Well done with this one June.
cheers,
valda
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Great photo June of this - frosty bridal veil- of water frozen by the winter chill. A lovely and descriptive Cadence poem and that final line is a beauty. Well done with this one June.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It always amazed me how flowing water cat freeze instantaneously and I remember seeing this happen in France on one of my visits during the winter months, you brought the scene to life here June, love Dolly x
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It always amazed me how flowing water cat freeze instantaneously and I remember seeing this happen in France on one of my visits during the winter months, you brought the scene to life here June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from jessizero
The imagery in this poem was lovely. It looks like you got the syllable counts right.
I also liked the picture you included. It really helped get your point across. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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The imagery in this poem was lovely. It looks like you got the syllable counts right.
I also liked the picture you included. It really helped get your point across. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
this
was a
cool cadence
poem - nice flow
over the edge
love the winter kissing autumn
and frosty veil lines
thank you for participating and sharing you chilled poem!
shelley :)
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this
was a
cool cadence
poem - nice flow
over the edge
love the winter kissing autumn
and frosty veil lines
thank you for participating and sharing you chilled poem!
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
June,
This is an excellent poem. I've seen scenes like this one. I lived in a rural town with a few creeks and springs that stood still by winter's freeze.A nice photo complementing your words.
Excellent club entry,
Best wishes,
Cindy
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June,
This is an excellent poem. I've seen scenes like this one. I lived in a rural town with a few creeks and springs that stood still by winter's freeze.A nice photo complementing your words.
Excellent club entry,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024