boo
a poem6 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
This is funny. That must make all of us ghosts. Excellent rhyme in this. I'm sure you could have found a clever picture to go with the poem. Come to think of it, you could be an owl. judi
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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This is funny. That must make all of us ghosts. Excellent rhyme in this. I'm sure you could have found a clever picture to go with the poem. Come to think of it, you could be an owl. judi
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Joila
Comment from nomi338
Bill, Bill, Bill. You never cease to amaze me. Out of nothing you manage to squeeze out something. Sometimes it is a gaseous emission (fart), sometimes it is a groan masquerading as a chuckle. Nonetheless, it is always something. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Bill, Bill, Bill. You never cease to amaze me. Out of nothing you manage to squeeze out something. Sometimes it is a gaseous emission (fart), sometimes it is a groan masquerading as a chuckle. Nonetheless, it is always something. Congratulations.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you, nomi
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, now that's quite the brash assumption there, isn't it, Sir Bill?! LOL! :-) Another fun one that lends to a smile and a thought... :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Well, now that's quite the brash assumption there, isn't it, Sir Bill?! LOL! :-) Another fun one that lends to a smile and a thought... :) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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What am I doing?
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Assuming I'm a ghost... :)
Comment from jim vecchio
Well, I'm a ghost of the man I used to be, so you're close. I'm afraid if I yelled "boo!" at anyone they'd carry me to the pysch ward. Although, we've become accustomed to many frightening things in this election.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Well, I'm a ghost of the man I used to be, so you're close. I'm afraid if I yelled "boo!" at anyone they'd carry me to the pysch ward. Although, we've become accustomed to many frightening things in this election.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Troomp?"
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I'm waiting for even stranger things to occur.
Comment from NanaGaye
Hoo Hoo to you too. Short and quick does the trick. Fun to read light hearted poems Keep on writing them put smiles on readers faces. How about a picture next time?
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Hoo Hoo to you too. Short and quick does the trick. Fun to read light hearted poems Keep on writing them put smiles on readers faces. How about a picture next time?
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I think I need a break.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I can say boo but I don't think I'm a ghost quite yet. As a poem I think your poem has lots of assonance and all three lines rhyme. Perhaps it was the owl that ate the "coo-ing" bird.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Well, I can say boo but I don't think I'm a ghost quite yet. As a poem I think your poem has lots of assonance and all three lines rhyme. Perhaps it was the owl that ate the "coo-ing" bird.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thanks for giving this a look, Helen
