2023 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "Woman".
8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is love and life at the basic level, and I find that absolutely perfect. My only question is what if he gets a daughter and not a son. Hmmm. I know, she'll have daddy wrapped around his little finger. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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This is love and life at the basic level, and I find that absolutely perfect. My only question is what if he gets a daughter and not a son. Hmmm. I know, she'll have daddy wrapped around his little finger. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaah... the vision of the simple farmer and his wife!! :) ;) Using nature/natural imagery -- the medium in which the farmer works and devotes his life -- to describe even his wife and their relationship is a wonderful literary tool here in your crafting!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Aaaaah... the vision of the simple farmer and his wife!! :) ;) Using nature/natural imagery -- the medium in which the farmer works and devotes his life -- to describe even his wife and their relationship is a wonderful literary tool here in your crafting!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Yvette
Gypsy 😊
Comment from dovemarie
Hi gypsy, good descriptions of a woman and a man and what they portray. The womanliness of giving herself to a man I like they way they are embracing each other and the man praying for a son by her to help him work the land. The softness of the woman and the roughness of the man complement each other. Dove
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Hi gypsy, good descriptions of a woman and a man and what they portray. The womanliness of giving herself to a man I like they way they are embracing each other and the man praying for a son by her to help him work the land. The softness of the woman and the roughness of the man complement each other. Dove
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, dove. I appreciate the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wow. That's about as stark and basic as life gets. It's like tge couple who had a baby to help their daughter who needed a kidney donor who was a perfect match. There's "practical," and then there's "um, that kind of crosses the line."
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Wow. That's about as stark and basic as life gets. It's like tge couple who had a baby to help their daughter who needed a kidney donor who was a perfect match. There's "practical," and then there's "um, that kind of crosses the line."
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Rachelle
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Nicely written Free Verse Poem. I have often seen the tenderness of a woman, soften the physical strengt and temper of a rough man.. if Icwere to express this in some circles today, I'd be ousted.
Thank you for sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Nicely written Free Verse Poem. I have often seen the tenderness of a woman, soften the physical strengt and temper of a rough man.. if Icwere to express this in some circles today, I'd be ousted.
Thank you for sharing
RJ
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
LOL! love that last line - didn't see that coming!
i also like how you used white clouds and rough hands - creative imagery!
great free verse!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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LOL! love that last line - didn't see that coming!
i also like how you used white clouds and rough hands - creative imagery!
great free verse!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your thought-provoking verse is written from the man's perspective as he views the woman in a rather ethereal/romanticised light while he is a man of the earth with a purpose to produce a son to perpetuate his role. This reminds me of DH Lawrence's themes in which he sees women aspiring to more spiritual needs while men are far more earth-bound and preoccupied with establishing roots and descendants. Thanks for sharing your interesting free verse, beautifully presented. Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Your thought-provoking verse is written from the man's perspective as he views the woman in a rather ethereal/romanticised light while he is a man of the earth with a purpose to produce a son to perpetuate his role. This reminds me of DH Lawrence's themes in which he sees women aspiring to more spiritual needs while men are far more earth-bound and preoccupied with establishing roots and descendants. Thanks for sharing your interesting free verse, beautifully presented. Debbie
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
I like the contrast of the woman with her lovely camellia countenance and fragrant jasmine with the gruff, manual laboring farmer who loves her and hopes for a son from their union.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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I like the contrast of the woman with her lovely camellia countenance and fragrant jasmine with the gruff, manual laboring farmer who loves her and hopes for a son from their union.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you big sister
marival