The Ballet Dancer
Acrostic competition5 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, such a fantastical vision your well-crafted acrostic portrays for your reader! Would only suggest, perhaps, removing that final comma there... Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!! ;)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Oh, such a fantastical vision your well-crafted acrostic portrays for your reader! Would only suggest, perhaps, removing that final comma there... Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!! ;)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
magnificent scene of ballet dance described within a very enchanting poem, many thanks for such a dreamy feeling through such inspiring verses: those kept me captivated until the last line,
Well done,
Regards,
Sarah
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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magnificent scene of ballet dance described within a very enchanting poem, many thanks for such a dreamy feeling through such inspiring verses: those kept me captivated until the last line,
Well done,
Regards,
Sarah
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful acrostic poem. I like how you used a different color for the beginning letters. The mental image you painted was lovely, as was the actual picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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This was a beautiful acrostic poem. I like how you used a different color for the beginning letters. The mental image you painted was lovely, as was the actual picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is especially appealing to me, not only because I'm a former dancer and because dance is my favorite of all the creative and performing arts, but because right before this one in the queue was one about how G-d will triumph over zombies. I totally needed this infusion of normalcy and beauty. THANK YOU, Mystery poet!! xoxox
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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This is especially appealing to me, not only because I'm a former dancer and because dance is my favorite of all the creative and performing arts, but because right before this one in the queue was one about how G-d will triumph over zombies. I totally needed this infusion of normalcy and beauty. THANK YOU, Mystery poet!! xoxox
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from papa55mike
I've seen one ballet in my life and was amazed at the artistry the dancers had. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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I've seen one ballet in my life and was amazed at the artistry the dancers had. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you