Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

I like how you juxtapose the soothing waves with your trust in the Creator. Your poem has a strong calming feeling to it.

I'm counting 26 syllables in your first stanza. May want to double-check that.
Also, I'm not sure more than one stanza is permitted for the Naani? I could be wrong about that.
Regardless, I enjoyed both the words and emotions evoked by your poem!
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024

Julie, you are quite right. The committee has allowed me to 'try' to fix it. I was never good at mathematics, despite calculators. Anyhow, if it still does not work a valuable lesson has been taught, thanks to Fan story.

Comment from Sarah Probe S.

Excellent

Very spiritual poem of appreciation of God's creation, and your painting enhances your stunning verses of description of the sea waves, in such a beautiful way,
Many thanks,
Warm regards,
Sarah

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024

Thank you so much.