Willing Hearts
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23 total reviews
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
this was a fairly exciting chapter. I like the action that took place. Sami is right- waiting is one of the most trying things a human can deal with. You're left in a state of limbo, helpless to do anything. Glad to hear that Myra was rescued, however it's yet to be determined how serious her injuries are. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Hello Barbara,
this was a fairly exciting chapter. I like the action that took place. Sami is right- waiting is one of the most trying things a human can deal with. You're left in a state of limbo, helpless to do anything. Glad to hear that Myra was rescued, however it's yet to be determined how serious her injuries are. Well done gal.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Esther Brown
Barbara your story is so sweet. Somehow you keep the romance afloat amidst the danger and suspense without making it soppy and keeping it real. People act so differently when faced with danger. Esther
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Barbara your story is so sweet. Somehow you keep the romance afloat amidst the danger and suspense without making it soppy and keeping it real. People act so differently when faced with danger. Esther
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement,
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, it got very intense at the end. I hope everybody is okay. Good development, as far as Sami and Noah's relation goes. I feel bad for everybody but especially for Sami, waiting is hard.
Well done, Barbara.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Wow, it got very intense at the end. I hope everybody is okay. Good development, as far as Sami and Noah's relation goes. I feel bad for everybody but especially for Sami, waiting is hard.
Well done, Barbara.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Waiting it hard. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The story is coming along with another bump in the fear factor as Mateo and Myra are taken to the hospital. No one else seems to be injured although, if there are young women being held in prostitution, they will need medical and psychological help also. Sami can hope Noah hasn't been injured.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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The story is coming along with another bump in the fear factor as Mateo and Myra are taken to the hospital. No one else seems to be injured although, if there are young women being held in prostitution, they will need medical and psychological help also. Sami can hope Noah hasn't been injured.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You caught me off guard, and of course, I liked it. I was going along thinking the love story was being most emphasized, then things blew up. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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You caught me off guard, and of course, I liked it. I was going along thinking the love story was being most emphasized, then things blew up. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this started on a gentle a slow note, where Noah a Sami finally found their way with each other. And then all hell broke loose. I loved it. All best, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Hi Barbara, this started on a gentle a slow note, where Noah a Sami finally found their way with each other. And then all hell broke loose. I loved it. All best, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from estory
This started slow, with that make up scene between Noah and Sami, and then some more small talk about playing poker, but then the action suddenly exploded as Chen moves on Mateo when Sami's cover is blown. We do see how Noah is walking this fine line between job protocols and his relationship with someone he has to protect. It is a fine line, I am not sure how this would be handled in real police forces. He would probably be taken off the case. The rising tension at the end of the chapter and the burst of action was well orchestrated though. We are on the edge of our seats as they head out to confront Chen. estory
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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This started slow, with that make up scene between Noah and Sami, and then some more small talk about playing poker, but then the action suddenly exploded as Chen moves on Mateo when Sami's cover is blown. We do see how Noah is walking this fine line between job protocols and his relationship with someone he has to protect. It is a fine line, I am not sure how this would be handled in real police forces. He would probably be taken off the case. The rising tension at the end of the chapter and the burst of action was well orchestrated though. We are on the edge of our seats as they head out to confront Chen. estory
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
So we have to wait for more news I am.glad Myra was rescued. Now more action would follow I feel .you succeeded in creating suspense both in Sami and readers
5th para ist sentence
"That to was not my intent" .
I think 'to' is not needed.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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So we have to wait for more news I am.glad Myra was rescued. Now more action would follow I feel .you succeeded in creating suspense both in Sami and readers
5th para ist sentence
"That to was not my intent" .
I think 'to' is not needed.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I'm positive Gremlins put the 'to' there. LOL I always appreciate the help.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
After I thought Sami was sounding more confident in the last chapter, she's back to being insecure again but, clearly by the end of this chapter with its dramatic turn of events, rightly concerned for Noah as well as Myra. Thanks for sharing another excellent chapter, Barbara. Could this be reaching a conclusion? Take care Debbie
That to(o) was not my intent
indic(a)ting all systems were good
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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After I thought Sami was sounding more confident in the last chapter, she's back to being insecure again but, clearly by the end of this chapter with its dramatic turn of events, rightly concerned for Noah as well as Myra. Thanks for sharing another excellent chapter, Barbara. Could this be reaching a conclusion? Take care Debbie
That to(o) was not my intent
indic(a)ting all systems were good
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the catches. I appreciate the help and have made the corrections.
Comment from Sankey
This was a great, dramatic read. You have a few spags this time around. Ha! Left an "o" off instead of the usual incorrect add! "That(,) to(o) was not my intent.
"Myra and Mateo are (on)their way
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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This was a great, dramatic read. You have a few spags this time around. Ha! Left an "o" off instead of the usual incorrect add! "That(,) to(o) was not my intent.
"Myra and Mateo are (on)their way
Comment Written 30-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the catches. I appreciate the help and have made the corrections.