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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "The Promise"inspiring poems for the souls and hearts
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Comment from Lana Marie
I stopped in to read some poetry and stories to review and I just noticed yours when it came up next. A nice little story of Hope to be reunited again with a loved one. I noticed this when I read it and figured you might want to update that word in parentheses.
Happy Thanksgiving Eve!
Our enemies( with) be punished,
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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I stopped in to read some poetry and stories to review and I just noticed yours when it came up next. A nice little story of Hope to be reunited again with a loved one. I noticed this when I read it and figured you might want to update that word in parentheses.
Happy Thanksgiving Eve!
Our enemies( with) be punished,
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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thanks a million, actually my account was hacked by rapper Jay Z who is wanted by the court of law for multiple copyrights breach, my account was sabotaged. My book is actually revised edited and published on Amazon and also copyright protected ( this was on Facebook since 2019 ) many many thanks for Your support and useful review.
Kind regards,
Sarah
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a lovely, but sad poem. It tells the story and makes the reader look between the lines for the full meaning of the story.
Well done and good luck in your contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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This is a lovely, but sad poem. It tells the story and makes the reader look between the lines for the full meaning of the story.
Well done and good luck in your contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 27-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
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thanks a bunch ❤️
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Sarah,
You're welcome.
Cecilia
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This a passionate plea of grief that opens with an attention-grabbing line: "I could not rescue you" before expanding in a determined, dramatic way, that nothing will prevent a reunion and those who have sought to do this will be punished. You have an original style that reminds me of earlier poetry to sit up and take note which this verse clearly commands. I would use a capital for Satan and Demons (on) all sides. But this is excellent, Sarah. Well done! Debbie
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This a passionate plea of grief that opens with an attention-grabbing line: "I could not rescue you" before expanding in a determined, dramatic way, that nothing will prevent a reunion and those who have sought to do this will be punished. You have an original style that reminds me of earlier poetry to sit up and take note which this verse clearly commands. I would use a capital for Satan and Demons (on) all sides. But this is excellent, Sarah. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Nov-2024
Comment from Regina Elliott
A thought provoking poem
for this Sunday morning,
dear poet. The imagery is
compelling. Keep on penning.
You have a way with words.
I love reading God themed
poems. Blessings of the day
to you.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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A thought provoking poem
for this Sunday morning,
dear poet. The imagery is
compelling. Keep on penning.
You have a way with words.
I love reading God themed
poems. Blessings of the day
to you.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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many thanks for Your kind words, i am glad You enjoy, my poems, inspired by the Holy Spirit ( when my heart is crushed, He draws closer to me )
Have a blessed Sunday ; )
❤️
Comment from TPAC
I like the thought of eternal compassion for someone, pondering whether an eternity being with someone: would draw them closer. Angels being kick out of Heaven doubts this probability. Good notion at least to believe possible.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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I like the thought of eternal compassion for someone, pondering whether an eternity being with someone: would draw them closer. Angels being kick out of Heaven doubts this probability. Good notion at least to believe possible.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2024
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yes some souls are separated by demons on earth and then only reunited in Heaven
many thanks for your lovely review ❤️
Comment from jim vecchio
The Lord is wholly fair. Satan seduced some of the angels and, for that, they are condemned. But He has a redemption plan for us mortals, and one of our tasks will be one day to teach the angels about redemption.
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The Lord is wholly fair. Satan seduced some of the angels and, for that, they are condemned. But He has a redemption plan for us mortals, and one of our tasks will be one day to teach the angels about redemption.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like people separated by war and the death that ensues as they are parted and the togetherness in Heaven later. An unusual and deeply moving poem Sarah, have a wonderful Sunday, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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This sounds like people separated by war and the death that ensues as they are parted and the togetherness in Heaven later. An unusual and deeply moving poem Sarah, have a wonderful Sunday, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Dear Dolly,
Many thanks for your kind words and for your lovely review, i am endlessly grateful,
Have a blessed Sunday,
Sarah