Comment from judiverse

Excellent

That Manson gang was wretched. I didn't remember Sexy Sadie. The one I remember is Squeaky Fromm who tried to kill Gerald Ford. I didn't remember that Beatles song, either. I agree she was a monster. Maybe she didn't listen to the right Beatles' songs. I enjoyed all the alliteration in your5-7-5. She looks like such a sweet thing, too. Great observation in your last line. judi

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Thank you for your review, Judi! Susan Atkins was the vile monster that stabbed Sharon Tate while she was eight months pregnant. She was probably the worst of them all next to Manson himself!

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Nice choice! I think Susan was the one that really got into writing PIG on the walls in the victims' blood. Great rhyme and I like how you got the Beatles reference in there. Manson was a big fan of their lyric Helter Skelter.
Great entry for the prompt!
Julie
:-)

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024

Thank you Julie! Great contest! Will be interesting to see who wins!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Oh my goodness this lady is very scary indeed and your words are chilling and appropriate for this contest, I wish you luck, I remember the Beatles song, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024

Thanks Dolly!