Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think sometimes what has happened to us may be experiences by our children and we don't want it to. The funny thing is as the saying goes, the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Beautifully written, good luck. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Thanks for a great review zanya

reply by royowen on 01-Oct-2024

Most welcome

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

A surprise ending to be sure! Thanx for sharing and best of luck!

murmured. ' follow --> murmured. 'Follow

many lovers,' --> many lovers.'

also her audacity --> also at her audacity

around briskly checking --> around, briskly checking OR around briskly, checking

Elena my love, I --> Elena, my love, I

faded Elena's --> faded, Elena's

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Thanks for reading and reviewing and the SPAGS! Zanya