Barefoot In The Rain
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Barefoot In The Rain Chap 1"An unexpected accident brings unexpected thoughts
32 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I suspect he will, indeed, be there tomorrow!
her heel caught in a crack, snapping off with a sharp. - Interesting. It works, but 'sharp', as you wrote it should be an adjective and is missing its noun. As I said, though, it works.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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I suspect he will, indeed, be there tomorrow!
her heel caught in a crack, snapping off with a sharp. - Interesting. It works, but 'sharp', as you wrote it should be an adjective and is missing its noun. As I said, though, it works.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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I fixed it and thank you! i appreciate your thoughts and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
OK, Carol,
Interesting start :-)
But why did you start Chapter One at the top with a sub-heading; summary of Chapter 1?
I kept looking for Chapter 1 LOL
Anyway, I don't do romance but i will give this a good old try as its you and i want to see what's going to happen
Tim x
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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OK, Carol,
Interesting start :-)
But why did you start Chapter One at the top with a sub-heading; summary of Chapter 1?
I kept looking for Chapter 1 LOL
Anyway, I don't do romance but i will give this a good old try as its you and i want to see what's going to happen
Tim x
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Posting this story has been a major headache.... but I said I would and I have. It's only going to be a short one... to help fill in for the month of December and then I'm back to writing what I love. I don't normally write romance either. Though I love to be romanced, it's not in me to write it.
Thanks for sticking with me!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from zanya
And thereby hangs a tale for the reader to mull over - who knows there might be a sequel out there in the ether? Who amongst us hasn't had a moment like this and probably at Christmas time when fun and laughter are in the air?
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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And thereby hangs a tale for the reader to mull over - who knows there might be a sequel out there in the ether? Who amongst us hasn't had a moment like this and probably at Christmas time when fun and laughter are in the air?
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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There is more to come to this little chance meeting and emotions will unravel. Thank you for enjoying the this chapter and for the awesome stars. I greatly appreciate you and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think it would be advisable to wear shoes. I used to wear very high stiletto heels, now flats and trainers! But, it seems to have brought something of a possible romance for this young lady! Well done, my friend, love it. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I think it would be advisable to wear shoes. I used to wear very high stiletto heels, now flats and trainers! But, it seems to have brought something of a possible romance for this young lady! Well done, my friend, love it. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I think this is the story I will use to finish out October... a little drama, a little sadness and a little love. thanks for reading this one, Sandra.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Douglas Goff
A very heart-warming genuine piece of work.
This short story manages to not only entertain the reader, but builds some anticipation.
Good job!
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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A very heart-warming genuine piece of work.
This short story manages to not only entertain the reader, but builds some anticipation.
Good job!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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A lot of the readers want me to expand on it and I might in order to cover October...giving me a break from the big novels because the next in the series is going to be a whopper.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
This is just delightful, Carol! To capture sudden attraction in so few words is not easy...
I love it when the frisson of romance sparks off the page without a hint of anything off-color.
I find myself, like most of your admirers, hoping you will carry this one further...
Shoes or no shoes this feels like destiny!
Please consider expanding!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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This is just delightful, Carol! To capture sudden attraction in so few words is not easy...
I love it when the frisson of romance sparks off the page without a hint of anything off-color.
I find myself, like most of your admirers, hoping you will carry this one further...
Shoes or no shoes this feels like destiny!
Please consider expanding!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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This one will be what I use between the end of the novel and the Nov 1 story, I think. It won't be full blown novel but I think I can stretch it to something interesting and fun. I didn't expect you to come back today and read more. Don't be pushing yourself.
smiles and hugs, Carol
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But I was so close to catching up on yours!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely little romance story, Carol with an amusing touch to it. I do believe fate steps in at times for us, as it did with this couple, wet feet and all. Loved it, Carol.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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This is a lovely little romance story, Carol with an amusing touch to it. I do believe fate steps in at times for us, as it did with this couple, wet feet and all. Loved it, Carol.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Thanks Valda
I am considering making the story continue because so many have found interest in me doing that. I appreciate your review and your comments.Smiles, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Very cute story, Carol. I love the fun of it. Running through the rain barefooted, but then gets to meet someone who she falls for. Great timing!! Hope she gets another chance with him the next day!! You need a follow up story.
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Very cute story, Carol. I love the fun of it. Running through the rain barefooted, but then gets to meet someone who she falls for. Great timing!! Hope she gets another chance with him the next day!! You need a follow up story.
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Funny you should say that Rhonda. Every one has been asking for the story to continue. I needed something to fill in during the month of October and I think this story might be the one. thank you so much for the review and the thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
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It was cute!!
Comment from Thesis
This is a cute story in a realistic setting that can happen in any city. I enjoyed the build up of losing her heel which led to the dialogue between her and the man who helped her. You left the ending so this romance story could continue.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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This is a cute story in a realistic setting that can happen in any city. I enjoyed the build up of losing her heel which led to the dialogue between her and the man who helped her. You left the ending so this romance story could continue.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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And it might....I can't believe how many readers have wanted just that... What started out as an amusing short sounds like it might get a life of its own. Thanks so much!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Wow. You've obviously got the goods when it comes to talent! This speeds along, it's got a natural feeling momentum! And hoorah for love at first sight! A great read!
Maddy
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Wow. You've obviously got the goods when it comes to talent! This speeds along, it's got a natural feeling momentum! And hoorah for love at first sight! A great read!
Maddy
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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What a nice thing to say, Madeleine. I appreciate you stopping by to read my short post... and I might continue it after I finish the last chapters in my novel. Your kindness and the review are greatly appreciated.
Smiles, Carol