Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Bill, very funny my special friend...
these days the joke would win...

I don't have time to think about sex...
and if I did I would most likely read a
book...what does that tell ya...LOL....scary...

once again I'm so sorry I missed these poems...
this summer I spent trying to get my house in
order...I let it go for so many years...and said...
this was my year to catch up...I did get a lot done
but still have a long way to go...

I miss you and all your sooooo funny poetry...
I wrote a few poems sometime back...but didn't like
them...but I figure in time I will get back writing...
it's crazy Bill...there was a time when all I could do
was think about writing...driving down the road...
the minute I would wake up...things would just
start popping in my head...all I wanted to do was write...
now it just not the same...I think I just have so much
going on...I do hope to slow down in time...and just
concentrate on my writing...

it was awesome to see you write again...and win...

I love your poem wonderful you...and wonder what the
guy in the picture is thinking...well done you...I hope you got
my note...still wouldn't let me get you a six...sorry ******...
love ya sweet guy...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024

Well, hello girl friend: Boy, have I missed talking to you, but I understand how the work around the house and land can get away from you, I've lived on a farm all my life...LOL...Until you just have to drop whatever you're doing and tend to the work that needs to be done.

I hope this reply finds you and your family all in good health, we're back into the season that brings back COVID, the flu, bad colds and many other things, including boredom.

Thanks for your great review, you always have written wonderful reviews on my poems and I truly appreciate that.

You take care of yourself my good friend...I will send you a message. Your old budddy...Bill

reply by l.raven on 04-Dec-2024

Hi Bill, your so right my wonderful friend...I did so this summer...and the more I did on my bucket list...I just kept adding more...

I miss you as well...and will message you...you are so very welcome...I love your poems...you always make me laugh...and your always so welcome...
love ya...Linda xxoo 🤗❤️🌹🙏🌼

Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Bill,

Welcome to Fanstory. Congrats on winning the 5-7-5 Poem Contest. Your sense of humor is well presented in this poem comparing a joke with sex.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024

Hello Eugene,

Thank you for your excellent review and your "Welcome to Fanstory," I appreciate that very much. However, I have been a member of Fanstory for 15 years now.

I hope and pray that Hurricane Helene did not cause you or any of your family any damage.

Have a great weekend...Bill

reply by BermyBye50 on 03-Oct-2024

Thank you Bill for your concern. I am thankful that Charlotte was minimally impacted by Helene as it passed west of the city.

Eugene

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL -- what a thoughtbig ! Certainly brings a smile to the adult face... :-) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the competition! :-)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Thank you very much for your great review, I really appreciate it. And, I am so glad it made you smile and thank you for your best of luck wish. It did win the contest.

Have a great week, my friend...Bill

Comment from Sally Law

Exceptional

A six for making me scream with laughter. I have a fractured foot and this just made my day. Congratulations on winning the contest, Bill. So well-deserved.
Sending along my very best.
Sal :))

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024

Hello Sal: Thanks so much for your great review and rating, I really appreciate it. It felt so good winning another contest, especially, since I haven't written anything in a long time. I joined Fanstory 15 years ago, just for the contests.

I hope and pray that this reply finds your fractured foot healing fast and that you and your family are safe and happy.
Your old friend...Bill

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Great joke and great accompanying notes. I couldn't exist this one. Your joke fits neatly into your 5-7-5 format and the image says it all. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024

Thank you Debbie for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Even though there wasn't many entries in this contest, it was fun. I appreciate all the voters for their winning votes.

Have a great week, my friend,,,Bill

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024

Thank you Debbie for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Even though there wasn't many entries in this contest, it was fun. I appreciate all the voters for their winning votes.

Have a great week, my friend,,,Bill

reply by Debbie D'Arcy on 30-Sep-2024

Sorry Cedar, I should have said I couldn't resist this one!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and it is a good entry for the contest. I wish you a very good day and wonderful weekend and may God bless you with all of your writing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024

Thank you Patricia for your great review and rating, I do appreciate it very much. Have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you and your family...

reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024

Thank you Patricia for your great review and rating, I do appreciate it very much. Have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you and your family...

Comment from Katiemae1977

Exceptional

Goodbye mystery poet.
You've really used the 5-7-5 format well and I think.this will do very well in the contest. You've made me smile with this one.
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024

Thank you very much Katiemae for your wonderful review and rating, I appreciate it very much. Have a great weekend...