Rage
A cadae poem24 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I read this quote just last week:
Anger is how we punish ourselves for someone else's behavior.
Isn't that fabulous? It really drives home the inanity of that feeling, doesn't it?
I liked your strong, visceral approach to describing this destructive emotion. Good work. xo
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I read this quote just last week:
Anger is how we punish ourselves for someone else's behavior.
Isn't that fabulous? It really drives home the inanity of that feeling, doesn't it?
I liked your strong, visceral approach to describing this destructive emotion. Good work. xo
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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YOU ARE RIGHT .It could be that.what hits me is that when anger takes over there is no way someone can c ontrol it. I have tried but thd person.has to get it off the chest then comes the regrets.Thank you for this review much appreciated
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've used the volcanic erruption well sanku, likening it to the erruption of anger. Domestic violence plays too big a part in all societies nowadays, and you've done well with the descriptive Cadee poem. Well done,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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You've used the volcanic erruption well sanku, likening it to the erruption of anger. Domestic violence plays too big a part in all societies nowadays, and you've done well with the descriptive Cadee poem. Well done,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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I have watched people burst out in anger and say hurtful things then comes regret what is the point ? Thanks for dropping by
Comment from Shanbreen
Sanku, I like this poem about anger. Yes, anger can be a a completely wasted energy. Better to calm down and plan a well thought of action. BTW, the painting goes very well with your poem.
One suggestion: It would be good if you explained what a cadae poem is. I looked it up on the net and found it is based on the Pi (3.1415...) How did you use these numbers and how many, since the number is infinite and does not end.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Sanku, I like this poem about anger. Yes, anger can be a a completely wasted energy. Better to calm down and plan a well thought of action. BTW, the painting goes very well with your poem.
One suggestion: It would be good if you explained what a cadae poem is. I looked it up on the net and found it is based on the Pi (3.1415...) How did you use these numbers and how many, since the number is infinite and does not end.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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IT should have come as a club event entry then the details about the poem.would have been there.From now i will.add that .thanks for dropping by
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Sanku,
Your explosive words describe very well the horrors and waste of anger. Excellent description of an emotion running rampant in our world.
Nice photo,
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Sanku,
Your explosive words describe very well the horrors and waste of anger. Excellent description of an emotion running rampant in our world.
Nice photo,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Begin Again
Anger is a powerful, but destructive vice that destroys so many...not just the person expressing it, but those who are on the receiving end as well. What a waste of energy!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Anger is a powerful, but destructive vice that destroys so many...not just the person expressing it, but those who are on the receiving end as well. What a waste of energy!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Since you did not explain the form that I have never heard of, and it is not listed in "Poetry Dances", I had to go look it up. Most places do not list it. It took me twenty minutes to find it on the internet. A simple explanation would be: The cadea honors PI. to the fourteenth place. 3.1415926535897 Fourteen lines each with the amount of syllables each number represents.
Karen
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Since you did not explain the form that I have never heard of, and it is not listed in "Poetry Dances", I had to go look it up. Most places do not list it. It took me twenty minutes to find it on the internet. A simple explanation would be: The cadea honors PI. to the fourteenth place. 3.1415926535897 Fourteen lines each with the amount of syllables each number represents.
Karen
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Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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It should have appeared under club event then thevthe details of the form.would have been there.Sometimes it is happening .from now onwards I will include that also.
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I appreciate that. There are almost 400 types of poetry. And counting. Karen
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Powerful poem with strong words representing anger. I agree that it is such a wasted emotion that is self destructive but also takes down many in its path. No good ever comes of it. Good job expressing this in your poem.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Powerful poem with strong words representing anger. I agree that it is such a wasted emotion that is self destructive but also takes down many in its path. No good ever comes of it. Good job expressing this in your poem.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thanks for dropping by
Comment from Wendy G
Anger is indeed self-destructive, but it also destroys others. This poem is a very well-written and powerful one, building up to a strong and climactic final stanza. original and different imagery - very pleasing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Anger is indeed self-destructive, but it also destroys others. This poem is a very well-written and powerful one, building up to a strong and climactic final stanza. original and different imagery - very pleasing.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from lyenochka
Super job with your Cadae poem, Santha. Your description of an outburst of rage likened to a volcano is very true to life. My father had a temper like that and the aftermath left many psychological wounds.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Super job with your Cadae poem, Santha. Your description of an outburst of rage likened to a volcano is very true to life. My father had a temper like that and the aftermath left many psychological wounds.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Even my father had .and once he starts no one can control him words just flow till he is spent then the regrets Thank uou Helen .
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
You depicted well this emotion , I love your choice of analogies.
I will take a lot of crap from others but I do have a breaking point.. and that s when all the anger accumulated over time explodes and the effect is cataclysmic.
Words spew like lava and I can't stop.. hours after when I have exhausted myself I start to think what I said and that's when too often I feel regret.
I curse my wicked mouth and wish I could go back and erase things I said.
I do a lot of gesticulating like all Italians do and I need to be loud , slam doors. I care not that neighbours hear me.
I feel like a Tasmanian Devil.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Ciao!
You depicted well this emotion , I love your choice of analogies.
I will take a lot of crap from others but I do have a breaking point.. and that s when all the anger accumulated over time explodes and the effect is cataclysmic.
Words spew like lava and I can't stop.. hours after when I have exhausted myself I start to think what I said and that's when too often I feel regret.
I curse my wicked mouth and wish I could go back and erase things I said.
I do a lot of gesticulating like all Italians do and I need to be loud , slam doors. I care not that neighbours hear me.
I feel like a Tasmanian Devil.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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The thing is that when one is angry midg foul words come out. later the regrets thanks for dropping by
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Exactly, by now I should have learned from previous outbursts to hold my sharp tongue, instead NO ( big sigh)