Ending the Day
free verse5 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
As a four-hour-a-night sleeper (not to worry; this is just how I'm wired; I'm not an insomniac; just high octane...), I am very familiar with the burning ball that gets quickly replaced with the new orb of morning! Very artistically worded, and I love the artwork you chose for it, as well. Good luck in the Free Verse contest!! xo
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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As a four-hour-a-night sleeper (not to worry; this is just how I'm wired; I'm not an insomniac; just high octane...), I am very familiar with the burning ball that gets quickly replaced with the new orb of morning! Very artistically worded, and I love the artwork you chose for it, as well. Good luck in the Free Verse contest!! xo
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle
Comment from artisart4u
Your poem is nice about an orb.
Your picture is beautiful and the way you wrote your poem is very nice. It looks like a bell.
Good luck with your free verse poem.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Your poem is nice about an orb.
Your picture is beautiful and the way you wrote your poem is very nice. It looks like a bell.
Good luck with your free verse poem.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you, AIA
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice!! I like the way you have described the setting of the sun and the rising of the moon in a fresh and creative way. It's a thoughtful and reflective poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Very nice!! I like the way you have described the setting of the sun and the rising of the moon in a fresh and creative way. It's a thoughtful and reflective poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Wendy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful free verse for the contest here -- your words of reflection on the sun and the moon and the passing of the day are well-spun -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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A beautiful free verse for the contest here -- your words of reflection on the sun and the moon and the passing of the day are well-spun -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Yvette
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautiful poem! I love the imagery of the "burning ball" falling into the horizon. I could feel a sense of loss reading it. I love how you shared positivity in the face of darkness - so beautifully shared. For me this is a reminder to enjoy the ups (and downs) of life.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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What a beautiful poem! I love the imagery of the "burning ball" falling into the horizon. I could feel a sense of loss reading it. I love how you shared positivity in the face of darkness - so beautifully shared. For me this is a reminder to enjoy the ups (and downs) of life.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Michael, for the kind and positive review.