Despair
I'm going through a dark time this is about that2 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
I'm so sorry you are going through a rough time. I hope writing helps by expressing it. I like how you personify despair, giving the feeling that it is intentionally targeting the narrator. It's very effectively done this way.
I wish you all the best.
Julie
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I'm so sorry you are going through a rough time. I hope writing helps by expressing it. I like how you personify despair, giving the feeling that it is intentionally targeting the narrator. It's very effectively done this way.
I wish you all the best.
Julie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Depression can grip like a vice and there seems not way to see he good in life, but the good is there if we seek it. I am sorry that this old enemy has returned and your poem is honest and written from the heart here Michael, love Dolly x
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Depression can grip like a vice and there seems not way to see he good in life, but the good is there if we seek it. I am sorry that this old enemy has returned and your poem is honest and written from the heart here Michael, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024