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Our Dad

a limerick

3 total reviews 
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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Without his shirt and pants, was nakedness what he ended up with that would last?? HAAA!! A little limerick-appreciation humor there.

Very cute limerick and what a nice picture to accompany it - though that guy, I notice, still does have his shirt. The pants remain a mystery, though: COULD be missing, too, COULD be fully intact.

Good luck in the contest, Mystery Contestant! xoxox

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Rachelle. I guess he kept his pants on most of the time.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 27-Sep-2024
    Well, but he does have children, soooo..
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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I like the story of your father in your limerick. You had some interesting lines describing his history, shall we say. It is a good read and entertaining.


 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Robert
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 26-Sep-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Nicki.B
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Haha! What a fun Limerick with a personalised touch, it gave me a good giggle! May be fiction but ots sound like a true story of how Dad met Mom lol! Well done and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
    Thanks, Nicki