Elusive Rainbow
Free verse3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful free verse for the contest here -- your words of reflection for a relationship past reveals that, perhaps, the rainbow is your freedom found without the pressures of another -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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A beautiful free verse for the contest here -- your words of reflection for a relationship past reveals that, perhaps, the rainbow is your freedom found without the pressures of another -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your considered and positive review.
Comment from jessizero
I really, truly loved the last line of this poem. You built up to it splendidly. This was a beautiful piece of free verse. Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I really, truly loved the last line of this poem. You built up to it splendidly. This was a beautiful piece of free verse. Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Jessi, for the great review and rating.
Comment from evilynne
Lovely words, well stated. Love is an elusive rainbow that is at time found too late. We regret the colors of our feelings when we realize they are gone. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Lovely words, well stated. Love is an elusive rainbow that is at time found too late. We regret the colors of our feelings when we realize they are gone. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Evilynne.
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You are welcome. Evi