Horses Run Free
free verse competition5 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful free verse for the contest here -- your words help the reader recall the freedom that can be felt on the hooves and sounds of the wild horse herds -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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A beautiful free verse for the contest here -- your words help the reader recall the freedom that can be felt on the hooves and sounds of the wild horse herds -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Julie Helms
Your poem has such beautiful imagery. There is nothing as beautiful as horses running just because. One day I was standing in my front yard. Suddenly 5 horses crested the hill in the field across the street from me. They were running, manes and tails flying. I was absolutely mesmerized. Till my senses returned and I realized horses should not be running loose around here. A moment later, three desperate humans crested the hill trying to catch them. Lol. Sorry....your poem sent me down memory lane.
Beautifully done and much enjoyed!
Julie
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Your poem has such beautiful imagery. There is nothing as beautiful as horses running just because. One day I was standing in my front yard. Suddenly 5 horses crested the hill in the field across the street from me. They were running, manes and tails flying. I was absolutely mesmerized. Till my senses returned and I realized horses should not be running loose around here. A moment later, three desperate humans crested the hill trying to catch them. Lol. Sorry....your poem sent me down memory lane.
Beautifully done and much enjoyed!
Julie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a beautifully written poem! I love the way you share the beauty of nature through the imagery of galloping horses. I love your word choices like "manes flowing" and "galloping in unison". I could picture them in my head! I was transported with your words to the beautiful landscape.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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What a beautifully written poem! I love the way you share the beauty of nature through the imagery of galloping horses. I love your word choices like "manes flowing" and "galloping in unison". I could picture them in my head! I was transported with your words to the beautiful landscape.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from evilynne
A very lovely description of wild horses running free. We can feel the movement and grace of these majestic creatures as they travel in their natural habitat with the lead stallion. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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A very lovely description of wild horses running free. We can feel the movement and grace of these majestic creatures as they travel in their natural habitat with the lead stallion. Best of luck in the contest. Evi
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you
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You are welcome! Evi
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful piece of free verse. I don't know if it's literal or if there's a deeper meaning behind this, but I enjoyed it either way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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This was a beautiful piece of free verse. I don't know if it's literal or if there's a deeper meaning behind this, but I enjoyed it either way. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you