Waged
Betting on life.3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
LOL! It fits the limerick style with 3-3-2-2-3 beats per line. And it made me giggle. Because it's true, gambling can sometimes cause someone to put their lives in peril...... Not that being in danger is funny, but it is a truism that people forget.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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LOL! It fits the limerick style with 3-3-2-2-3 beats per line. And it made me giggle. Because it's true, gambling can sometimes cause someone to put their lives in peril...... Not that being in danger is funny, but it is a truism that people forget.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This limerick, Waged, has the proper formatting and sees the point that the better's chances at continuing his bad habit becomes less important than his chances to continue breathing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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This limerick, Waged, has the proper formatting and sees the point that the better's chances at continuing his bad habit becomes less important than his chances to continue breathing.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from jessizero
Eep! This limerick about gambling was exciting and funny, though it's a serious matter. You got the suggested syllable count right, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Eep! This limerick about gambling was exciting and funny, though it's a serious matter. You got the suggested syllable count right, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I so appreciate your review.