Trumpian LImerick
a Limerick about Trump3 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
An amusing 'trumpian' limerick and I agree, I think his character suits this form and a cartoon caricature too. He still thinks the world wants to hear what he says, unfortunately.
Cheers
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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An amusing 'trumpian' limerick and I agree, I think his character suits this form and a cartoon caricature too. He still thinks the world wants to hear what he says, unfortunately.
Cheers
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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thanks a lot
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
You need to check your syllable count.
You have 8 8 5 6 7
The last two lines are wrong.
HE-MAN counts as ONE WORD but still has two syllables so line 4 is one syllable too much
And line 5 is missing a syllable
Best of luck!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Ciao!
You need to check your syllable count.
You have 8 8 5 6 7
The last two lines are wrong.
HE-MAN counts as ONE WORD but still has two syllables so line 4 is one syllable too much
And line 5 is missing a syllable
Best of luck!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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thanks I will fix it.
Comment from jessizero
I think that last line was one syllable short, but I could be wrong, and the syllable count was only "preferred," anyway. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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I think that last line was one syllable short, but I could be wrong, and the syllable count was only "preferred," anyway. I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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thanks a lot I will fix the last line